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Duniya bananey Waleh....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Jun 21, 2008.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey! Duniya bananey waleh,Thodi daer chup jana kahin..
    Khi nah deknah padey kya haal hua hain tumharein
    banayi duniya ka.......,

    Banaya tha thumney ma aur baap soch key dono
    rakengey thumhare banaye phoolon koh, hifasat sey..
    Ab nah dekh sakogey,khi wahi ban gaye kasayi,
    kuchhal detey hain nazuk kaliyon koh, leke khandaan key naam.
    Jahan bhai bhai bhoolgaya hai bhaicharey koh...
    Jahan koi nahi samajtha raakhi key dagey..
    Jahan koi mol nahi khoon pasiney kah.....


    Aadmi behek gaya hai, itna,sahi and galat kha ehsaas
    choot gaya hai ussey.Ab kisko bejney waley ho
    phir sey pyar kah ehsaas dilaaney..

    Agar aaj tum bhi aao,hamare saamne, tho
    sawaal karenge tumharey astitva par,
    hum itney door,ja chukey hain, laut aana mushkil
    ho gaya hai, Yakeen,barosa, dosti ek doosarey
    par karna hum bhool gaye hain....


    Kartein hum yahi dua, na tumhara pyar ho jaye kum,
    Khi tum humsey roothkey jod dey hamein hamari haal pey...
    Hey duniya key rakhwale, duniya bananey wale
    Phir sey chahiye thoda sah jadoo, jissey ho sab koh
    apas mein pyar aur dosti sey rehne ki aasha,
    Wapas bananey aman aur shanthi kah jahaan...
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Shanthi
    Such a beautiful poem Shan and those feelings into it is just mind blowing.
    So through how can we ask The creator of this world to see the today of today where brother is trying to slash his brother.
    Wah wah so you are waiting for the Lord to send an angel to teach these people to love again....
    Wouldn't that be great if Lord can make these people human again.
    So true you are right the even if today Lord will come in front of us we will not be able to recognise him, becoz we have lost that faith on human beings.....

    Phir sey chahiye thoda sah jadoo, jissey ho sab koh
    apas mein pyar aur dosti sey rehne ki aasha,:thumbsup

    Aagar duniya bananey walla wapas aah kar woosaki jadoo ki chadhi gumayegha tho kitna accha hoga.
     
  3. Shanvy

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    Aw EQ,

    i completely forgot i scribbled these. so sweet of you to read every line and give me such a nice fb.

    miss those days of camaraderie that made me scribble so much yaar.

    makes me call on them...

    aa..ab laut chalein...
    un haseen palon mein....
     
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    So true just miss those days hope our group comes back and we have fun around like before.
     

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