A poem i have written for Valentine's day .. "He loves me , he loves me not " To find out ,I look into his eyes Knowing well his love can't be bought Preparing myself for that certain surprise We met at a party on New Year's eve Dressed nattily , he looked a dish He asked me as to where I live Tongue tied , I wonder if he guessed my wish We jabbered all through the night Danced a little ,pranced a lot Didn't want to leave try as I might Losing control , like it or not "Well, can we meet again?" "Why, I would like that " "Then join me on the 5 30 train Perfect time for a heart to heart chat" My face lights up on seeing him He makes contact and gives a wave Hair blowing , shirt flying, figure trim " Tread gently .dangerous waters , do behave " Jumping on to the platform Walking across to the bus stop Looking to creating our love storm Seated side by side way at the top Cosy twosome , sharing a burger He is busy eating , and I'm in wonder Should I kiss him , make a merger? Hold hands , getting fonder ? The ice has been broken beween us Headlong we are falling in turbulent love In fervent hope that it continues thus And the good Lord showers blessings from above Would love to have u all join in ..
IL , thank u for moving this poem to here....but nobody seems to have seen it yet i meant to put it in snippets forumbut by mistake put it in contest forum Im new here ..still finding my way around the forums , blogs sub forums ..and so ended up posting it in wrong forum im still not able to view other people's blogs jaijui
Jaijui, a great way of expressing the first flush of expectation and the head rush towards a relationship. Great feeling and definitely curious to know the outcome of the anticipation of the fireworks...:idea
hey shanvy, thank u ..itis all about first meeting .breaking the ice ..was the theme.. kinda fiction but yes i had fun with my guy too on V day .. jaijui
