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Careful Be Careful!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mistt, Jun 13, 2021.

  1. Mistt

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    Careful be careful girl!
    Some are cruel like death, they don't stop until they see your end.
    Some are hard like stone, they don't care about your emotions.
    Careful be careful girl.
    Some are selfish like fox, they use you, then throw a blame on you and make you insane in front of others.
    Some are like chameleon, they change their colors according to their benefits.
    Some are like honey coated knife, they show their true colors once their task is done.
    Careful be careful girl.
     
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  2. SuiDhaaga

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  3. Lalithambigai

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    Wow! @Mistt, you are on a roll. Just when we were starting to miss someone's poems and the poetess behind those poems, seems like you picked up the mantle, just in time :) The poetess left some big shoes to fill so we got @SuiDhaaga also to help us with this situation. More power to you both!

    We see a mother, an elder sister, a friend, a colleague or for that matter any woman cautioning another woman, even if she is a stranger to her, about the dangers lurking around and to stay on alert. If these words of caution, end up saving just one, they would have served their purpose, though I imagine they will save a lot more, for years to come. Can't wait to see what comes out of your pen next :)
     
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  4. Mistt

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    Thanks Lalitha for your mature comments and I appreciate your constant support. :laughing:
     
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    Good to know that you wrote another poem with inspiration of my poem.
     
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  6. SuiDhaaga

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    Thank you for the lovely words and encouragement.

    Mistt's poems are inspirational!
     
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  7. Thyagarajan

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    This poem gave opportunity to know that @Lalithambigai is a great fan of poems . This I could assess from her rare FB here. Every poem is like a perfect picture and mostly it lends emotion to the reader as they “study” the poem. Few poems in one read you can get to know the core. Few got be re read to know poet’s picturesque mind.

    Yes girls in this nasty world, has got to be ever-circumspect, like a hunter in thick forest as dangers lurk from anywhere that includes above and below. As a hunter prowls, there could be an attack from above his head or he might step on to mines. They got to remain vigilant 24 x 7.

    A short poem yet with a riveting message, nailed into head in time.
     
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