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Camouflaged In Love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Vidhyathan, Apr 30, 2007.

  1. Vidhyathan

    Vidhyathan Senior IL'ite

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    You let me be
    Everything I want to be
    You show me, me
    That alone I’d never see.

    Your love
    Makes me strong
    I am eager for each new day
    To try out life my way.

    Your love
    Makes me fall on my knee
    It’s the way you make me feel
    All that I thought was unreal.

    Your love
    Makes me happy
    I am always on cloud nine
    Knowing you are mine.

    Your love
    Makes my heart throb
    But no more for me
    Not even for a wee.

    Your love
    Makes me feel secure
    Anytime I put my hands out
    Your palms will cover them no doubt.

    Your love
    Fills my heart with love
    Paints my soul with love
    Until I’m camouflaged in your love.
     
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  2. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice!
    May your love flourish forever :)

    L, Kamla
     
  3. Vidhyathan

    Vidhyathan Senior IL'ite

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  4. BhargaviChakravarthy

    BhargaviChakravarthy Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi,
    I really enjoyed those lines
    esp the line
    Your love
    Makes me feel secure
    Good one:2thumbsup:
     
  5. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Good one, Enjoyed the poem.....very fresh and deep!:2thumbsup:
     
  6. radhavenkatesh

    radhavenkatesh Bronze IL'ite

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    Camouflaged ?
    maybe title dosent suit such a heart touching one pl dont let any love to be camouflaged let it be honest and frm within.
     
  7. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello


    wonderful flow of words ya
    nice and touching

    sathya
     
  8. Vidhyathan

    Vidhyathan Senior IL'ite

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    hi Bharghavi,Sathya and Sudha,
    good to know you enjoyed reading my poem. i enjoyed the writing part too.
     
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  9. Vidhyathan

    Vidhyathan Senior IL'ite

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    hi radha,
    what i meant by being camouflaged is that love sometime makes me feel so strong and also make me feel weak. its like you are so happy when you are with the person you love and you miss them so much when they are not around. so its like love can change my mood. so i am the one who is camouflaged.


     

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