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Be Faithful to your Loved one

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Chilbuli Imli, Oct 21, 2007.

  1. Chilbuli Imli

    Chilbuli Imli Senior IL'ite

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    The passengers on the bus watched sympathetically as the attractive young woman with the white cane made her way carefully up the steps. She paid the driver and, using her hands to feel the location of the seats, walked down the aisle and found the seat he'd told her was empty. Then she's settled in, placed her briefcase on her lap and rested her cane against her leg.

    It had been a year since Susan became blind. Due to a medical mis-diagnosis, she had been rendered sightless, and she was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness, anger, frustration and self-pity. 'How could this have happened to me?' she would plead, her heart knotted with anger. But no matter how much she cried or ranted or prayed, she knew the painful truth, her sight was never going to
    return. A cloud of depression hung over Susan's once optimistic spirit. All she had to cling to was her husband Mark.

    Mark was an Air Force officer and he loved Susan with all his heart. When she first lost her sight, he watched her sink into despair and was determined to help his w! ife gain the strength she needed to become independent again.

    Finally, Susan felt ready to return to her job, but how would she get there? She used to take the bus, but was now too frightened to get around the city by herself. Mark volunteered to drive her to work each day, even though they worked at opposite ends of the city. At first, this comforted Susan and fulfilled Mark's need to protect his sightless wife who was so insecure about performing the slightest task. Soon, however Mark realized that this arrangement wasn't working - it was hectic, and costly.

    Susan is going to have to start taking the bus again, he admitted to himself. But just the thought of mentioning it to her made him cringe. She was still so fragile, so angry. How would she react? Just as Mark predicted, Susan was horrified at the idea of taking the bu! s again. "I'm blind!" she responded bitterly. "How am I supposed to know where I'm going? I feel like you're abandoning me."


    Mark's heart broke but he knew what had to be done. He promised Susan that each day he would ride the bus with her until she got the hang of it. And that is exactly what happened. For two solid weeks, Mark, military uniform and all, accompanied Susan to and from work each day. He taught her how to rely on her other senses to determine where she was and how to adapt to her new environment. He helped her befriend the bus drivers who could watch out for her, and save her a seat. Each morning they made the journey together, and Mark would take a cab back to his office.

    Although this routine was even more costly and exhausting than the previous one, Mark knew it was only a matter of time before Susan would be able to ride the bu! s on her own. Finally, Susan decided that she was ready to try the trip on her own. Monday morning arrived, and before she left, she threw her arms around Mark, her temporary bus riding companion, her husband, and her best friend. Her eyes filled with tears of gratitude for his loyalty, his patience, his love. She said good-bye, and for the first time, they went their separate ways. Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday.... Each day on her own went perfectly, and Susan had never felt better.
    On Friday morning, Susan took the bus to work as usual. As she was paying for her fare to exit the bus, the driver said, "Boy, I sure envy you." Susan wasn't sure if the driver was speaking to her or not. After all, who on earth would ever envy a blind woman who had struggled just to find the courage to live for the past year? "Why do you envy me?"

    The driver resp! onded, "It must feel so good to be taken care of and protected like you are." Susan had no idea what the driver was talking about, "What do you mean?" The driver said, "You know, every morning for the past week, a fine looking gentleman in a military uniform has been standing across the corner watching you when you get off the bus. He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches you until you enter your office building. Then he blows you a kiss, gives you a little salute and walks away. You are one lucky lady."

    Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. For although she couldn't see him, she had always felt Mark's presence. She was blessed, so blessed, for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight, a gift she didn't need to see to believe - the gift of love that can bring light where there had been darkness.

    "You don't love a woman because she is beautiful,but she is beautiful because you love her..."

    So if you love someone be faithful to that person.

    Cheers
    CBI
     
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  2. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello cbi...


    thats too cute a story....i have read this before...ya in chicken soup for the soul....
    the last sentence...is great.....

    You don't love a woman because she is beautiful,but she is beautiful because you love her..."

    sathya
     
  3. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Cbi,

    That Was A Real Real Wonderful Stuff, It Is Like If Sita Had Known What Trauma Rama Went Through She Would Not Mind The Turmoil That She Went Through, As There Was So Much Love Between Them..sunkan
     
  4. Eljaype

    Eljaype Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear CBI,

    That was a nice and touching one. I also believe in the saying you said

    You don't love a woman because she is beautiful,but she is beautiful because you love her..."

    That is the same with the husbands too.

    Sometimes you see an ill matched couple , one will be very pretty / Handsome , the other won't be. But they'll be a made for each other couple and have a very good understanding and respect for each other.

    Love
    Latha :wave
     
    Last edited: Oct 23, 2007
  5. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear CBI,

    That was a real touching story.... The husband, giving confidence to the wife to be independent and ensuring that she reaches safely.....

    That is something great... In this materialistic world where, people just walkout.... True love exists....
     
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    Huma Silver IL'ite

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    hi

    nice story.......
     
  7. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks for posting Truly wonderful.
     
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    vivbass Gold IL'ite

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    really heart touching story:2thumbsup:
     
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    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi chulbuli,

    good one.

    But Being there for your loved one at all times...is more important.(as that is what this story is all about...)..whether it is your husband, wife, or kids...being there is what counts.......
     
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    varalotti IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear CBI,

    That was one swell story. The gentle presence of the strongest love a husband could ever have for his wife came out like a beautiful breeze in a summer evening.

    I am sure, CBI, anyone who has read this stuff is not going to be the same person again.

    Thanks a ton for bringing the story to us,
    love,
     

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