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bahut tak gayi hoon.................

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Nov 19, 2007.

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  1. Nov 22, 2007 #21
    malspie

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    Dear Shanthi,
    This is what I can tell you ……………
    Aa Gaya hai kyon Vapas, is thakhan ka roop lekar
    Faulad hoon takra jaungi, chattan se, Kali ka roop lekar
    Shanthi naam hai mera, par mere naam se math za
    Zala kar raakh kar du tujhe, apna mooh chupa ke nikal za
    Tera koshish nakaam ho gaya , main nahin hoon kamzor
    Har tufaan ka samna karoongi, Ho zayega tu bin door
    Shanthi naam hai mera, par mere naam se math za
    Zala kar raakh kar du tujhe, apna mooh chupa ke nikal za
    Zindagai aur haalat hai mere, Khuda hai mere saath
    Tu kya banayega thakaan, aur bigdi meri haalath
    Shanthi naam hai mera, par mere naam se math za
    Zala kar raakh kar du tujhe, apna mooh chupa ke nikal za
    Kuch karmon ke vazah se, hoon main thoda pareshan
    Lekin yaad rakh thu yeh thakaan, thuje main karoongi hairan
    Shanthi naam hai mera, par mere naam se math za
    Zala kar raakh kar du tujhe, apna mooh chupa ke nikal za
    Ladna mujhe aatha hai, aur ladthi aaye hoon main
    Jeeth kar hee Dum thodungi, thuje na zithlaungi main
    Shanthi naam hai mera, par mere naam se math za
    Zala kar raakh kar du tujhe, apna mooh chupa ke nikal za
     
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    malspie, Nov 22, 2007
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  2. Nov 22, 2007 #22
    Arunarc

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    Hello Mals
    Super wordings...............
    This poem will encourage anyone to fight and proceed forward
     
    Arunarc, Nov 22, 2007
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  3. Nov 22, 2007 #23
    Shanvy

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    hey mals,

    Thanks for peeping....I am not depressed..and i am a FIGHTER...I cannot leave things without fighting...so i am back to normal self...arre sometimes a day or 2 of a low comes and goes.....

    the tides of the ocean,
    with the high and lows,
    bring a lot of precious
    things to the surface....

    so this low has brought lot of my friends to support me....i am really happy to see all of your support....
     
    Shanvy, Nov 22, 2007
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  4. Nov 22, 2007 #24
    malspie

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    Hi Shanthi,

    Your poem reflected on your low spirit on that day.. Just pepped you up.. Bye !!
     
    malspie, Nov 22, 2007
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  5. Nov 22, 2007 #25
    Shanvy

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    thanks mals,

    aap jaise dost ho tho i will not be down for long right....
     
    Shanvy, Nov 22, 2007
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  6. Nov 23, 2007 #26
    Sriniketan

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    Hi Shanthi,
    Eventhough, mujkho hindhi bhahooth nahi samaj saktha, i understood the poetry as a whole and fully from the replies.
    I know 'you are a tough girl', it is true that sometimes we get tired of everything.
    Cheer up, everything will be alright in the near future!

    sriniketan
     
    Sriniketan, Nov 23, 2007
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  7. Nov 23, 2007 #27
    Shanvy

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    hi sriniketan,

    thanks. i am very fine now...
     
    Shanvy, Nov 23, 2007
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  8. Nov 23, 2007 #28
    Vysan

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    Dear Sunkan,

    Thanks for your words of wisdom... I agree with you that money cant buy everything....
    But for the commitments we have to do certain things... Yeah, it is only for a small time.... May GOD give the strength to wade through tough waters succeesfully....
     
    Vysan, Nov 23, 2007
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  9. Nov 23, 2007 #29
    Vysan

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    Dear Arunarc,

    Thanx....

    Thanx for the concerns.... Your point noted and will take care...
     
    Vysan, Nov 23, 2007
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  10. Nov 23, 2007 #30
    sunkan

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    dear aruna,
    never knew these words existed in my heart and how they flew here making a nice couplet..thanku for your appreciation..sunkan
     
    sunkan, Nov 23, 2007
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