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bahut tak gayi hoon.................

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Nov 19, 2007.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    zindagi ki is mod peh tak gayein hai jaan
    laga tha hum pahunch gaye us paar..
    abhi dekho toh lagta hai hum hain
    nah is paar yah us paar...

    lagta hai aur bhi baaki meri manzil,
    saahil se takarakar aur aa gayi majdhaar..
    toda himmat dena yaara,ki doond sakoon..
    meri manzil kis taraf...kya karoon..
    bahut thak gayi hoon...

    aajkal roney seh bhi dartey hain
    kya pata agar gal jayey unka
    roop jo ankhon mein basah hai...
    hum kitney nadaan hain khi,
    yeh bhi naa samaj sakey
    har musafir, zindagi ka sahara
    nahin hota unkey siwa....

    zara unko dekhloon,
    do chaar batein kar loon,
    shayad meri takaan door ho jaye
    aur phir zindagi mein bahaar aa jaye....
     
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  2. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    bachon ko lekar pahunch ja us paar,
    ye jawani ki rounak jo tuje rula rahi hai,
    use jalaney na dena na tho
    jal jayegi ummidon ki thyohar,
    ankhon mey ya dil mein base tho hain bus
    akele thumey chode ye kiski kwayish thi
    jo alag raho aur luta do jawani

    chal ut jaldisey aur physla suna
    ki hum unse mil rahe hain jaldi hi
    thaaki hum jaise doston ki ummiden
    jo aap ki khushi par bhichaye baite hain.sukoon miley hamey bhi.
    sunkan
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    My one more will read it tomorrow both the poem even Sunkan started writting in Hindi Not bad keep it up as today not feeling so well will read it peacefully
     
  4. MeenLoch

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    Duniya ka pyar jo hai tumhare paas
    Mana wo kuch nahi us pyar ke samne
    Bas kuch hi din hain us tat ke paar
    Tahar jao zara sa yaar

    Shayad na koi samjhe usko
    Jo tumhare poore dil se ho
    Sacha pyar hai jo tumhara
    Aa jayenge jaldi wo

    e-duniya ka karo prayog
    doori kam to ho jayegi
    Lekin Jee chahega more
    Yeh cheez hi kuch aise hai

    Never knew I could write. Thanks for triggering this Shanthi..Hope it makes some sense...
     
  5. Shanvy

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    hi sk,

    That was a good fb....but kya karoon...you know..me....
     
  6. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi yaar,

    Kya hua...take care.....

     
  7. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    Wah, kya kamal ka poem hai.....man ke khayalon ko roop de diya Shanti ne........Aur, Sundari, sundar tha aap ka jawab...:)

    L, Kamla
     
  8. sunkan

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    thanku kamla ji,
    wah aap ka presence yahan tho aur bhi rounak bada di is thread ki..sk
     
  9. Shanvy

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    Hi vidya,

    Good one...

    tumhari pehli kavitha bahut lajawab
    hamari dil ko behalaya bahut khoob.
    hum majboor hai, rehne is paar...
    khuda se dhua karteh hai khole kuch dwaar...

    hum roz karte hai e-duniya mein sair...
    aap jaise kuch dost joh hain mere
    rakthey hain hamare mann ko
    halkey halkey toh,lagta hai abhi
    yeh takhaan ho gaya hai majboor,
    ab humey chod gaya hai chust
     
  10. Shanvy

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    Shukriya, kamla, aap aaye yahaan bahaar aa gaya....
     

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