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As i walk through my memories

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Oct 19, 2007.

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  1. Oct 20, 2007 #11
    Shanvy

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    hI priyu,

    Thank you.
     
    Shanvy, Oct 20, 2007
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  2. Oct 21, 2007 #12
    Malathijagan

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    That's a wonderful one for your first attempt! And your hubby to have sent the first reply must have been reassuring for you. The two of you are really lucky to be in each others company after all 'The trials and turbulences'. That shows the love and respect you have for each other. The poem is right out of your heart and so too it is beautiful!
     
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  3. Oct 21, 2007 #13
    sunkan

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    dear shanthi,
    it is a nice walk, and when u took me through that i felt and saw many things though ur a very sensitive person there is a steel determination to walk through turbulance and yes remembering the love now that is an effort not all can think and cherish those act of love...wonderful for a first attempt..sunkan
     
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  4. Oct 21, 2007 #14
    latamurali

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    Hai shanthi

    First attempt????????????!!!!!!!!

    Very nice yaar and very touchy too.....

    I know ur very good in everything , so no wonder for this poem

    HATS OFF TO U DEAR SHANTHI

    latamurali
     
    latamurali, Oct 21, 2007
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  5. Oct 21, 2007 #15
    Arunarc

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    Hi Shanthi
    Hats off... These are beautiful wordings.
     
    Arunarc, Oct 21, 2007
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  6. Oct 21, 2007 #16
    Shanvy

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    hi malathi,

    thanks for stepping in and putting your comments....

    yeah veda's reply was very assuring. but all your replies have made me happy, and a little confident in giving it a try again..so expect more scribbles ....
     
    Shanvy, Oct 21, 2007
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  7. Oct 22, 2007 #17
    Shanvy

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    hi sunkan,
    Thanks for stepping in....
    when i wrote these lines (i still cant think in terms of poem) i thought i am stupid to post it here...but so many fb's have really boosted my confidence...
    thanks for seeing through and thoroughly my walk.:tongue
     
    Shanvy, Oct 22, 2007
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  8. Oct 22, 2007 #18
    Shanvy

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    Hi latha,

    Thanks for reading this....
     
    Shanvy, Oct 22, 2007
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  9. Oct 26, 2007 #19
    rajmiarun

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    Anbu Shanvy,
    Mudhal muyarchi arputha muyarchi
    Azhtha ennangalin arputha velipadu
    Solla Vanthathai azhagai solli
    Anaivarin ennangalaiyum Kollai kondai
    Vazthugal Vazthugal
    Idhupol pala kavithai padaika.
     
    rajmiarun, Oct 26, 2007
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  10. Oct 26, 2007 #20
    Shanvy

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    hi rajmi,
    enna venru solla....
    thikku mukku aadi nirkiraen
    mudal muyarchikku kidaitha adaravaal..
    en sila varigal illai kirukalukku....
    vazthukku mikka nanri....
     
    Shanvy, Oct 26, 2007
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