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Aprils shower

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by aami, Jun 27, 2007.

  1. aami

    aami New IL'ite

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    Black clouds throws coal
    In an yellowish evening...
    Then comes the wind...
    as an enchanter..
    black folios dance
    with the rhythm
    of its movement...
    Oh rain....
    dry April is waiting for u...
    your drops are the sighs
    Of barren earth.
    Smell of love is in the air..
    You dance in the wind..
    When u go,
    Trees shed their tears ...
    life began to sprout some where...
    And leave away the waiting...
    waiting for ur arrival...
     
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  2. lathanarasimhan

    lathanarasimhan New IL'ite

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    Nice one Ami!
    I too live in Bangalore. Hope to meet you sometime.
    regards latha:)
     
  3. aami

    aami New IL'ite

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    thank u latha!!!i m happy that u like it!!!
     
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  4. Tamildownunder

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    Dear Aami,

    Your poem makes me wishing that I were in Bangalore and dance to the April Rains. When I was in Melbourne, when the much needed rains came to nearby town, people danced in the streets.

    Keep writing nice poems like this one.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
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  5. aami

    aami New IL'ite

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    thank u TDU!!!rains r so beautifull every where wen its much needed....

    aami:-D :wave
     
  6. sathya

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    hello aami

    tiny droplets
    of rain by aami
    sure welcomes
    the rain
    and all of us to visit
    when it is raining
    the peeping shoots on trees
    the new blossoms
    the wet chirping birds
    the smell of wet earth
    a welcome to dear dear
    rain
    like the amirdhavarshini raga....

    sathya
     
  7. aami

    aami New IL'ite

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    sathya u have added very beautyfull pendent to my poem by writing like this...i m so happy that u got the feeling ...and enjoyed it...

    aami:yes: :tongue
     
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