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Ancient Indusladies

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SuiDhaaga, Jun 13, 2021.

  1. SuiDhaaga

    SuiDhaaga Platinum IL'ite

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    Sita was most happy in the Forest
    With so many Flowers
    She didn't need a Florist

    Kunti was most happy in the Forest
    The Natural Riches were so Many
    No wonder the Kauravas
    Felt they were without a single Penny

    The Trees, The Flowers, The Birds, The Sparrow
    It would be hard to
    Aim an Arrow!

    Draupadi was boiling in the Forest
    With Rightful-Indignation
    When war broke out
    She broke out of this Vortex
    With Vindication!

    Forest is used for Exile
    Forest is used for Birth
    Forest is used to Teach us
    What we are Truly Worth

    Forest Along the Indus Valley
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  2. Thyagarajan

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    A super sonnet-like poem with convergence of
    Sita, Kunti & Draupadi are all herein Indus ladies
    Mix and mingle in different forest lands
    Delivering life lessons
    Compacted by @SuiDhaaga .

    Indus River now in Pakistan
    Clearly in those ancient days
    It was our Hindusthan
    Reminds us of world's oldest
    Civilisation of which I am proud!

    Ps. Photo is befitting.
     
  3. SuiDhaaga

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    I like your comments and analysis!
     
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