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An Ode to an Ex Valentine

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by twinsmom, Feb 15, 2008.

  1. twinsmom

    twinsmom Silver IL'ite

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    Five years have been forgotten...gone,
    Yet, thoughts of you still do adorn,
    My memory, and my heart's forlorn,
    As I miss you, my first love!

    I remember when across the hall,
    My eyes fell on you, a pretty doll,
    As you waited like a deb at a ball,
    For someone to notice you, dove!

    One look at you and at that moment,
    Like a soothing balm for a soul in torment,
    Emotions hitherto that lay dormant,
    In me, woke and how! By Jove!

    Half a decade of blissful life,
    With none between us, not e'en my wife,
    In a world racked by disaster and strife,
    Darling! How our love alone throve!

    Your sleek body, epitome of perfection,
    Drives me crazy even in reflection,
    As you purred in my hands in satisfaction,
    None shall separate us, thus did I vow!

    Yet, like any male prototype,
    I too, fell for glamour and hype,
    'Times are a changing, an' time is now ripe,'
    And gave our affair, the deathly shove!

    Now, I hang around with a classy chick,
    My sultry, seductive but amazonic pick,
    But my heart misses an occasional tick,
    All at sea like a sinking scow!

    My new MRV is great to cruise around,
    The latest Honda, with style abound,
    Yet I miss my first valentine, I've found,
    The Nissan Sunny that once I drove!



    P.S. Written on behalf of my husband on a lighter note...

    Written with an absolute misuse of poetic license... so don't come back to me saying words don't rhyme... After all, there is no rhyme or reason for the way one behaves when in love or when one misses his first love!
     
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  2. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice one Twinsmom!

    Expecting something mischievous when looking at the title, and was waiting, waiting and waiting...till the end.

    twist at the end as usual.

    sriniketan
     
  3. twinsmom

    twinsmom Silver IL'ite

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    Srini sir,
    I wonder what it is that men find in their cars that they don't find in their wives!!!:idontgetit:
     
  4. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Beautiful words and the love showered so much.......that too to the car
    Men like cars more then they wife's because cars don't do blah blah blah..........all the time...............Rant.........................
    Just kidding it was a nice one and it is true they take more care of her(car)............Big Laugh
     
  5. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    One joke came to my mind----

    if a man opens a car for his wife, either the car must be new or the bride must be new
    How is that?

    sriniketan
     

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