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An Enigma

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Apr 25, 2019.

  1. GeetaKashyap

    GeetaKashyap IL Hall of Fame

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    Nandu, Missed you a lot! Hope all is well at your end.

    past should be left in past, no amount of cribbing or breeding changes it....
    Acceptance, forgive, forget and no to move on in life is a big thing and comes with loads of practise....


    In theory, it is easy but in practice, it is tough and it calls for a lot of work and seasoning of mind. I too am working on this.:(

    A return hug to you too; your presence here has started my day on a beautiful note.:banana:
     
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    Yes geets, I am doing good and my girls are keeping me busy....
    I missed you and your writings too....
    Yes, practise makes a man perfect, so am sure one day, we will
     
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    Bringing up children is indeed the busiest phase of a woman's life; been there and done that. I deeply respect all women and their sacrifices.

    Let us keep up the practice going; some day we may get total grip on it.:thumbup:
     
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    Good suspense and narration. I felt as if I was watching a cinema . well written, @GeetaKashyap . good week end entertainment.
     
  5. GeetaKashyap

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    Thank you so much for liking this story.:hearteyes:
     
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    Good twist. unexpected for me!
    I was thinking about how my mind had made up that Dr. Sachdev to be only male. I wondered why and realized that I knew a boy with that surname and automatically associated him with that character in your story.

    Coming to your story, i do not know what else to write except say yes to all the other feedback.

    So with one word let me say "Fantabulous!"
     
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    Yes it's indeed the most busy phase and most demanding too.
     
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    Hey kkrish,

    Thanks for the appreciation; getting it from you makes it all the more special!

    Yes, we do tend to associate the names and persons. When I created the character of Dr Sahani, the only name I could think of for him was that of my ex-boss, Inder! He too was a very quiet type of person, moreover, Inder is such a typically Punjabi name!
     
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    First thing before commenting on the story while reading this I was taken back to my Mumbai days. My married life started in Malad (west ). It holds a very special place in my heart. :hearteyes:
    And what an intriguing start to the story . I'm curious to know more. Who is angad? Why is Simran doubtful about him. I'll straigt away jump to next episodes.
    And I was waiting for a quite evening "me time in the weekend " to read your story. :blush:
     
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    :cheer::cheer: What a twist. I read first episode and read few comments . Did @Rihana guess this in the beginning .. ?
    Then I decided I'm not reading any comments as the suspense maybe revealed. :chatter::chatter:
    Okay I'm happy about them being siblings. They have each other. Simran will not feel lonely anymore ..

    Great narration .. Loved the thrill it offered ... :clap2::clap2:
     

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