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An Enigma

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Apr 25, 2019.

  1. Mistt

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    Geeta,
    I always try to follow above lines. Very interesting and every line of the story is really very natural.:thumbup: I like the suspense and I feel both Simran and Angad must relate to each other. waiting to read next part of the story.
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

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    :hello:that is perhaps me.
    2. Introverts seem to think deep always pensive forget to ack ptesence of others close to him seldom befriend others easily not lazy but.
    3. Initially hesitant suspect but now simran let Angad to her Heart.
    Good going.
    4. Next shot not underneath a tall salubrious tree with lush mountain backdrop both circling around, he in full suit and she clad in ....casuals.
    Thanks and regards.
    God dwells in the loving hearts akin to Godess Lakxme on standing lotus.
     
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    Thanks Adharv for your encouraging comments. The mystery will be revealed this evening; hope it surpasses your expectations.
     
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    :) At the rate you are coming up with 'God-lines', soon you may be able to publish an unique book!
     
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    Thanks for the sympathy, peddadas. Nobody can predict what turns the life takes. I once met a 23 old girl on a train. She had lost her parents in an accident and she had an younger sibling to support!
     
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    Shravs, thanks for your comment. This evening I am posting the last episode. I hope it meets your expectations.
     
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    Thanks, GB, for finding the story so far interesting. I haven't read this book by Anupama Niranjana; I will try to read it. She was a great writer.
     
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    Thanks for the comment, dear Mistt, I was waiting for it. These exchanges helps me to gauge how the story is being perceived and I can tweak the lines or the plot, if needed, to bring together all the loose ends.:)
     
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    Thanks for the interesting feedback, Sir. In general, chatterboxes can keep the atmosphere alive but they do tend to reveal things a little more than necessary. I also Know a couple of chatterboxes who are extremely aware of what they reveal. An ideal combination, I guess!.
     
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    :hello: I endorse your views about chatter and boxes which at times turns them to boxers.
    Thanks and Regards.
    Re of chattering and clicking teeth Of boxers in the arena.
     
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