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Aging with grace.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Aug 11, 2008.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    saahitya,

    thanks for stepping in and also for the encouragement.
     
  2. Vysan

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    Dear EQA,

    How can I be 21, when you are only 16... This is not fair... You know pretty well that I am younger to you....

    Veda
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Veda

    Big LaughBig Laughso that I am telling you I am 16, for you to come to 16 you will have to wait for another 5 years:thumbsup
     
  4. BHAVNAM6

    BHAVNAM6 Platinum IL'ite

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    My dear Shanvy,

    You have narrated very delicately and beautifully your wonderful emotions.....every woman could relate herself with your thought process.....

    Love,
    Bhavna
     
  5. prettydevil

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    Shanvy..... you wrote this sooo beautifully.... now I am confused.... should I be scared of aging or wait for my age to age it gracefully...:)

    very nicely written :thumbsup
     
  6. sharmilay

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    Awesome poem. Thanks for sharing the poem here.
     
  7. parineetha

    parineetha IL Hall of Fame

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    Shanti Di, That was sooo awesome!
    Who said you're growing old? I always get the feel that you're newly married..So much of love and passion.
    You're soo young at heart.
     
  8. Kamla

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    Dear Shanvy,

    The beauty of penning your sincere thoughts is it will always remain evergreen!

    Yes Shanvy, you wrote this poem in 2008 and now after near to five years, it still captures peoples' imagination! Prettydevil has nominated this poem for the FP of the month and I cannot thank her enough for now I got to read this wonderful verse penned by you.

    You may be practical and all that, that does not change the fact that love has touched you to the core! I wish both you and Vysan remain forever young in love and you will never age for each other. A lovely poem!


    L, Kamla
     
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  9. Mumtotwo

    Mumtotwo Silver IL'ite

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    Its a beautiful poem...loved the last verse.
     
  10. Kamalji

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    Dea r Shanti,

    Thanks to the nominations i came here to read this wonderful poem by u, so true and so touching.Veda is lucky to have u eh !

    Yes we all have to age, wrinkle and get grey and white hair, but how gracefully we accept it, we must learn from u.

    superb.

    Regards

    kamal
     

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