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A Thin Sharp Needle

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Caide, Oct 5, 2016.

  1. Caide

    Caide Platinum IL'ite

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    A thin sharp needle….:sconf::sconf::sconf:

    A look of it made my tears role down all by itself…:sob::sob:

    Turned to look for help…

    Though I was the one who decided to come here…:p:p

    The sight of needle made me to shiver…:rolleye::rolleye::rolleye:

    First idea to run away from spot…

    Tears hide my sight…:shakehead::shakehead::shakehead:

    While a hand with needle came near…

    A pair of hands held my shoulders tight….

    Trying to make me realize his presence…

    Hugged my father…

    Complaining it will be very painful…:fearscream::fearscream::fearscream::fearscream:

    Than insisting to return home…:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

    There…

    Had my ear pierced.…:thumbsup::thumbsup:

    Not for first time but second….:thumbup::thumbup:

    With new set of earrings… :thumbup::thumbup::thumbup:
     
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  2. vaidehi71

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    LOL.:lol:
    Very lovely and humourous poem. :smiley:
    What a contrast, and I was imaging many a things which can prick :flushed::eek: until I came to the end!:tearsofjoy:
    Really good and funny!:)
     
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  3. Caide

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    hehe yeah i had my nose and ear(2 times) pierced for amma she love it :D
     
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    Seems you too love it!!!:)
     
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    amma ilaya amma love panna namalum pana vendiyathu than :D i love it too and i am and will always create hye hye when someone try to touch it or while amma try to apply oil in my hair :D ennai irangida kudathu parunga
     
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    that is so true!
     
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    yeah i did for her but i in turn started to love it :D
     
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    Caide i thought you have written about an injection needle.Aha very nice narration of ear piercing needle.
     
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    thank you i was not scared of injection at that time :D
     
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    Dear @Caide ,

    OMG, your capacity to create suspense is great!

    A pin prick on your ears brings a lovely poem from you!!

    Enjoyed!!!
     
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