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A Split Second World Of Fiction

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sunkan, May 10, 2008.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    Did I meet u in my digital world?
    You were just a chat name and nothing more
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    [FONT=&quot]A man without a face [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]You just logged into my world [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]And made it so colorful[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Every day morning and evening [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]I looked forward to say the little hai to you,[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]You shared your world and I was happy just to be with you[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]I read desire in your words and a thrill ran down my spine[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]I was torn with reality and the world I shared with you[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]I fantasized and created a world with only me and you[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]Then came a flash and I woke up with a start [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]To realize the reality and the world of you[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]My active imagination gave away [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Sensation painted with love which not even [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]A real lover could afford to endure[/FONT]

    [FONT=&quot]It was after all my inner voice and not you[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]I grieved the silence I could never share [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]My lover was a fiction but [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]my sense of loss was real[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]When both collided reality won[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Because I wanted it to win,[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]I missed my internet lover[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]But wanted my real world too[/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Sanity returned but the flight was great [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Something to cherish in a moment [/FONT]
    [FONT=&quot]Life goes on without you…. sunkan[/FONT]
     
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  2. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Sunkan,

    That is really great... How true... Once we get to used to people on the net, even if we dont chat with them for a day, we miss them a lot..

    Great...

    Veda
     
  3. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    thanku veda,
    i do enjoy the early morning hai ana yarumey illey mm..sunkan
     
  4. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Sundari,
    That was a beautiful poem!


    Those lines were beautiful!
    Regards
    Malathi
     
  5. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    thanku malathi,
    happy u came here it is very valuable..sunkan
     
  6. Venonimiss

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    Wonderful..Exactly what people go through sometimes with that chat and email addiction and ofcourse with the IL addiction too!!
     
  7. sunkan

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    yes venus,
    this happens a lot we connect with the unknown without our own realization and one day all goes phut and u land heavily..sunkan
     
  8. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Sunkan,
    A very Apt poem in todays times, People are in search for communication and when they find one the name , the face doesnt really matter. You are addicted not to the PC but to the feeling of being wanted. A feeling that you belong.I guess thats what gives a high to all those addicted!
    I loved every word Sunkan! Excellent!

    Love,
    Devika
     
  9. sunkan

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    thanku devika for your valuable comment ..sunkan
     
  10. Sriniketan

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    Sunkan,
    Very well expressed the addiction to today's communicative world....
    But the last 4 lines caught my attention very much...

    sriniketan
     

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