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A poem that I wrote to my husband

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jodi1617, Feb 21, 2011.

  1. jodi1617

    jodi1617 New IL'ite

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    This is a poem that I wrote to my husband once. This was the time when I was a grad student and we were living away from each other in two different cities, and I was thinking of him during valentine's day.

    "In my dreams I think of you,
    In my thoughts I have you;
    I cherish your memories,
    I smile remembering you.

    The times that we have spent,
    As good and bad they can get,
    For every moment is precious to me,
    The place you reside is in my heart!"

    I am glad that we are now living with each other in the same city!
     
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  2. shams86

    shams86 Bronze IL'ite

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    Gud poem dear.....
     
  3. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Crisp and nicely conveyed. Glad to read. Thanks jodi1617. -rgs
     
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    namrathamorab Gold IL'ite

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    cinderella06 Platinum IL'ite

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    Very nice poem..i love these lines..:thumbsup
     
  6. jodi1617

    jodi1617 New IL'ite

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    Thankyou all. I was wanting to put this in the Me and Spouse category for the competition, but I guess it was moved here...
     
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    malligashivaram Gold IL'ite

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    Jodi that was a really well written poem simple and loving ---enjoying each day of your life in ..in simple loving togetherness very nice and sweet:thumbsup:thumbsup
     
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    That's an impressive one. I liked that, hope your husband would had also liked it
     
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    Simple and sweet.. says a lot... Nicely written
     

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