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a love letter....

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by thechanakya, Apr 12, 2015.

  1. thechanakya

    thechanakya Bronze IL'ite

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    Never a believer of love-at-first-sight
    Well, not until I met you.

    The first time I laid my eyes on you
    Oh what perfection , I thought.

    The first time our bodies touched
    I was startled at the connection between us

    The first time you looked at into my eyes
    I lost myself in depths of yours

    The first time I held you
    Knowing you were mine

    The first time you smiled
    My world came to a standstill.

    Watching your dimples play hide and seek
    Were the best spent moments of my life

    My most energetic and productive days
    were those following sleepless nights spent watching you sleep


    Listening to you breathe
    Was music to my ears

    giving you my name
    gave reason for my existance....

    Dedicated to every daughter who is her
    Mommy’s world and Daddy girl.
     
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  2. VanithaSudhir

    VanithaSudhir Platinum IL'ite

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    A poignant love letter...

    Reminds me of the lines from a famous Tamil Song
    'pengalai Petra appakkaluku thaan theriyum..muththam kammathil sernthadu illai endru'
    (only the fathers of girl babies know that kissing a girl doesn't always belong to lust)

    Your daughter is very lucky to have a daddy like you !
     
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    PushpavalliSrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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  4. ramya1979

    ramya1979 Bronze IL'ite

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    Daddy's will set high expectations to their daughter's and husband's cant meet later.....That's where the problem starts .....:rotfl
     
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    Harini73 Platinum IL'ite

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    Hi @thechanakya,

    Lovely love poem.





     
  6. suryakala

    suryakala IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear @thechanakya ,

    A parent can write such a lovely poem for a child! Incredibly Beautiful!

    Enjoyed!
     

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