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55 words story - 3,4,5 - based on IL entries

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by tuffyshri, Apr 10, 2012.

  1. tuffyshri

    tuffyshri Gold IL'ite

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    These entries 3, 4 and 5 are heavily based on other authors in IL Blog space. Sorry for reusing the theme without your permission! :( In fact I am not able to trace back the authors though I roughly remember RGS, Iswarya, as few of them.
    Pls treat this as an attempt to do a precis writing of your excellent ones. Also forgive me for spoiling the flavour.

    3) Divorce
    It is becoming very difficult to see Roopa these days. Her mother is very strict. She cannot meet me, cannot talk to me. I don’t know for how long” said Gokul.
    Get married” suggested Danie.
    No way… I cannot compensate Suja. Though she initiated the divorce. I will win the custody of my daughter Roopa

    4) Room Partner
    I got a small room after tiresome search. Suddenly a pretty young lady came inside. She claimed that she would share the room. I protested but my heavy lids got pulled down without any word.


    Next day the receptionist gave a squeak. “Oh God, that must be Andrea, who committed suicide in that room!


    5) Missing something

    How will I tell her? She got into the train 2 stations later than me. I went for a fag, came back to see her sitting here, disturbing me a lot. She is beautiful and looked intelligent. Will she understand?
    I sigh in relief when she got down as I occupy my favourite window seat.
     
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  2. upfsabari

    upfsabari IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow.. Nice ones tuffyshri.. :)
     
  3. SM11870

    SM11870 Silver IL'ite

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    All are nice.......specially Room partner..it gives goosebumps....!!!
     
  4. Viswamitra

    Viswamitra Finest Post Winner

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    Very good attempt. It still conveyed the theme. I am learning a lot how to be brief. Since I got older, I have a tendency to say a word in a sentence, a sentence in a blog and a blog's content in a book.

    Viswa
     
  5. strangerrr

    strangerrr Gold IL'ite

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    all 5 stories are nice :) i would rate 'the gift' as best among all 5.

    :)
     
  6. AkilaMani

    AkilaMani Local Champion Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Shree,

    Very nice :) Enjoyed them all... the last one is sweet and is inspired from our strangerrr's blogs which I enjoyed a lot. Good ones dear!!

    Akila
     
  7. rgsrinivasan

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    Doctor
    "God! That was too close!", sighed the gynecologist Uma, after a tough maternity case. She suddenly realized that she did not have any food since morning. She walked quickly to the cafeteria and was just about to have the first bite, when her cell rang. "Emergency? God! I am coming now!", said the childless Uma.
     
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    ramyaramani Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Like 3 and 5. 4 was obvious. Hope you hav been sending your notaries to the contest.
     
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