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Discussion in 'Regional Poetry' started by sasha17, Feb 22, 2013.

  1. Feb 22, 2013 #1
    sasha17

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    சாலையோரத்தில்
    கீழே கிடக்கும்
    கற்களைக் கண்டாலே
    ஒதுங்குபவர்கள் ,
    கலங்கி நிற்கும்
    வாழ்விழந்த ஜீவன்களையா ,
    இல்லை
    வலுவிழந்த மனங்களையா
    கண்டுகொள்வார்கள் !!
    இல்லவே இல்லை !
    மனித நேயம்
    மனிதருள் மரத்துவிட்டது
    மற்புதிரில் மறைந்திருக்கும்
    கல் போல !
     
    sasha17, Feb 22, 2013
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  2. Feb 26, 2013 #2
    rgsrinivasan

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    Nice start, though on a sorry note, Sasha17. Thanks for sharing. -rgs
     
    rgsrinivasan, Feb 26, 2013
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  3. Feb 26, 2013 #3
    quantSundar

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    IMO its prosaic.
     
    quantSundar, Feb 26, 2013
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  4. Feb 27, 2013 #4
    sasha17

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    Thank u so much rgs:)
     
    sasha17, Feb 27, 2013
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  5. Feb 27, 2013 #5
    sasha17

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    Thanks for ur reply!! I am Just a beginner in writing kavithais so it may lack something and looks prosaic!

    I will try to improve myself.
     
    sasha17, Feb 27, 2013
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