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  1. Mar 22, 2011 #1
    Malar2301

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    தோழி என்ற நினைப்பிலே
    சொல்லிவிட்டாய் உன் காதலை!!!
    தோழன் என்ற நினைப்பிலே
    ஏற்றுக்கொண்டேன் நானும் அதை!!!

    அழகாய் சென்றது நாட்கள்
    மெல்ல தடுமாறியது பின்பு!!

    நட்பில் தவறும் இனிமையாய்!!!
    இன்று அதுபோலில்லை - மனம் வெறுமையாய்!!!

    நாம் என்றிருந்த நட்பு
    இன்று தான் என்று ஆகிப்போனது என்ன!!

    வளர்பிறை என இருந்த நம் நட்பு
    இன்று தேய்பிறை கண்டதென்ன!!!
     
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    Malar2301, Mar 22, 2011
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  2. Mar 22, 2011 #2
    Coffeelover

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    Nice Poem, Malar.

    This is my understanding. May be she thought of him as a friend and he must have been in love with her. It happens all the time.

    feel sorry for him.:idea:idea:idea:idea
     
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  3. Mar 22, 2011 #3
    iswaryadevi

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    Good one Malar :thumbsup
     
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    வளர்ந்து தேய்கிறது நட்பு ...காதல் படுத்தும் பாடு
     
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  5. Mar 24, 2011 #5
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    காதலர்கள் நண்பர்களாக இருக்கலாம்
    ஆனால் நண்பர்கள் காதலர்கள் ஆனால்
    இழப்பு, ஈடு கொடுக்க இயலாத இமயமாய்
    இரக்கமின்றி உறக்கம் தொலைக்கும்

    உண்மை வரிகள் மலர்
     
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  6. Mar 24, 2011 #6
    ILoveTulips

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    Dear Malar,

    Very heavy lines... yes indeed... natpukkum, kaadhalukkum vidhyaasam puriyaamal edukkum mudivu, natpai, onrumillaamal theindhu poga vaikkiradhu... idhai unarthiya ungal kavidhai vegu azhagu malar... :)

    veni_mohan avargaley, Ovvoru kavidhaikkum badhilaai, adhan saaramsathai appadiye eduthu, pudhidhaaga innoru kavidhai vadikkum ungal thiran miga arumai...
     
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  7. Mar 25, 2011 #7
    laddubala

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    உண்மையான வரிகள் தோழி:thumbsup


    வேணி அக்கா, உனது வரிகள் அருமை. :)
     
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    Malar2301

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    Dear CL aunty, I have a strong belief that a good friend can be a good life sharing partner. But the one that I told here is, after entering into the committed relationship, there were few scenarios where only then a problem starts and after couple of months they started thinking back that during the time of frienship it was so good and start feeling that "pesama friends ah ve irundirukkalam pola nu".

    Each one have their own views and yours had brought a different angle to my peom...thanks!!
     
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    Malar2301

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    Thanks Ice for your never missing feedback!!!
     
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    Malar2301

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    Unmaithaan Thozhi!!! Thanks for coming!!
     
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