Sad ending, no doubt. But yes this happens in cinema. The villain gets the upper hand in the first half and the hero takes revenge in the second...
This is crazy Tamrakshar. Now I understand the meaning of the title of your story, the ultimate choice. Archana has to make an ultimate choice you...
Oh very unfortunate things are happening to the detective and police. How are they going to catch Joker and his team?
Wow Bhanje, you are keeping the readers on their toes. I will have to say that you have matured as a writer. I am eagerly waiting for the next...
You are writing a very good entertaining story. How could all people vanish? Where did they vanish? I am eagerly waiting for your next episode....
Your story is very intriguing filled with suspense. Well done.
It is good to know that the investigation team will get into action. Very good narration, Tamrakshar. :thumbsup:
The story is building up well for grand ending. Good work Tamrakshar. :biggrin:
Xi, Nigella, Bah. Story is going to be very interesting. Another person will pass the test. That will be very interesting also. Looking forward to...
It is great to read that Archana has come out of the mouth of death. The voices that she heard must be divine. The God has helped her to survive....
