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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Dec 10, 2018.

  1. Frangipani

    Frangipani Silver IL'ite

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    Excellent story , @GeetaKashyap .
    It has style content and message also . well written , I liked it.
     
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  2. GeetaKashyap

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    Thanks, dear Frangipani.
     
  3. Thyagarajan

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    :hello:I read and enjoyed the twist in the end. The reader in the beginning of story believes the happening real and later paras revel it is just but shooting and reader continue to believe now it is only shooting when in the end it turns out to be real somewhat. It is sound to have the pleadings of Nikki gone to the head of the man who feels life at the end of tether switches to a changed heart as Nikki walks off assembling the gadget.
    Wow. Excellent choice of words and narration.
    God bless you.
     
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  4. GeetaKashyap

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    Your appreciation means a lot. Thank you so much for a favourable review, @Thyagarajan Sir.

    This story was highly appreciated when I published it on another forum but here, somehow it didn't take off! Perhaps IL'tes didn't like it!:disrelieved:
     
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  5. Thyagarajan

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    :hello:It could be incorrect and or premature to conclude so. It is week end onthe other side of the globe. It is a pleasure to read for you and come with a gist. Due to paucity of time and the readers divide their time between work indoor and outdoor,your patrons would be slow to read and record their views.
    Thanks and Regards.
    God is watching from centre East & West as earth rotates and moves along.
     
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    Sir, this is an old story published in December 2018!:hmmm:
     

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