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"and Suddenly You Became My Everything" - The First Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, May 15, 2018.

  1. anadev16

    anadev16 Silver IL'ite

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    Hi Iniyasri,

    I was a silent reader and first of all thank you for posting regularly. I am not blaming others as everyone has their own issues and personal problems in continuing the story.

    Secondly your narration was wonderful and your connectivity with past and present happenings is wonderful.
    I am very happy to read this story but sad as it is ending

    May be you can plan a story about happenings after re-unite like a sequel as you are a wonderful writer and I m sure u will score it.

    Once again thanks for writing a story like this and expecting more.
     
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    muggs Gold IL'ite

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    Wow... Awesome ending... All together settled happily and Vaasu's entry added lovely charm to the story... Great narration throughout :cheer::banana:
    Thanks for giving such a beautiful piece of writing :clap2::clap2:
     
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  3. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you so much for saying that!
    Thanks a lot for the love and support! : ) : ) : )
    Stay blessed! : )
     
  4. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Thank you so much!: )
    Glad that you liked the characterizations! : ) : ) : )
    Thank you so much dear! : ) : ) : )
    Take care : ) : ) : )
     
  5. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Very happy that you loved my story! : ) : ) : )
    Thank you so much for your sweet words!
    Miss you too!
    Thanks once again! : ) : ) : )
     
  6. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Feeling thankful Aarthi dear! : )
    Even I would like to meet you guys someday! :)
    Feels great when you say that! Am humbled!
    Love you too and take care dear!
    Thanks once again for being with me throughout my stories! :worship2:
     
  7. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks a lot PS!
    Thank you so much once again! : ) : ) : )
    Thanks for the love and support!
    Take care :) : ) : )
     
  8. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey Laxmi dear!


    Thank you so much : ) : ) : )
    Even I will miss you guys! : (
    Thank you so much for the kind words dear!
    Daily dose is it : ) : ) Happy to hear that : )
    Thank you so much!
    Thanks! Glad that you will be reading my first story!
    Will be happy to read your thoughts on it as well!
    Thank you so much for the love and support!
    Thanks once again:worship2:
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey Rupz dear!

    Very happy that you liked the climax!
    I use to bite my nails after posting every Climax episode!
    Glad that you liked it! : ) Happy!
    Overjoyed when you say that you lived with the characters....
    Thank you so much!!!
    Thanks for the positive vibes dear! : )
    Take care and love you too! : ) : ) : )
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey dear!

    Hope you are doing good! Happy to see your comment here! : )
    Feeling good that I was able to post regularly! Thank God! I didnt want to make you guys wait for long.
    Finally managed to post it without much gaps! Thanks for reading regularly! : )
    Very happy that you liked my narration dear! : )
    May be I will think about it! : D
    Thank you so much once again for letting me know your thoughts! :worship2:
    Take care and good day : ) : ) : )
     

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