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Love You To The Moon & The Back - A Bunch Of Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, May 22, 2017.

  1. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey darling...

    Thank you so much for this vivid feedback :blush::blush::blush:
    Kohl eyed Rathna and curly haired Jaanvi:smile: thanks a lot!!!!
    Glad that you found the good messages I tried to give:blush::blush::blush:
    I created Prabhu's character to show why Jaanvi chose Gaurav rather than Prabhu....
    And yeah I wanted to have twist....Even I myself was not sure of what ending I will give to Jaanvi...
    I thought of many options...
    Hope you liked the story overall. Happy that you liked the occasion:relaxed: as well.
    Your last line was tooo sweet:kissingheart::kissingheart::kissingheart::kissingheart:
    Lots of love, hugs and kisses to you:blush::blush::blush::blush:
    Stay blessed. :blush:
     
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    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey dear....

    Happy that you enjoyed reading the story!:blush:
    Thriller...:rolleye:. I already attempted one last time...
    Not sure whether I am good at thriller stories....
    Also not sure whether I will write a story in near future.
    If I write, will let you know
    Thanks a lot for your love :blush::blush::blush::blush::blush:
    Have a great day:blush::blush::blush:
     
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  3. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Ammu!!!

    Thank you so much for reading my story!!! :blush::blush::blush::blush:
    Glad that you liked that climax :blush::blush::blush:
    Thanks for your love! Have a good day:blush::blush:
     
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  4. creativemumma

    creativemumma Gold IL'ite

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    True!
    that's a good point...seeking jaanvi just becoz he wanted a mother to his daughter and nothing else!
     
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    aarthi28 Platinum IL'ite

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    Iniyaaaa
    Ummmmmaaaaaaaauuuuaaaah
    Simply superb ending.
    As usual u rock dear....
    One thing very sad abt that Little one sruthi than prabhu. If u have shown some bad faces of prabhu an easier acceptance wud have been there
    A disappointment when it comes to a kid da...

    Neraya thonudhu aana varthaiyala ezgudha mudiyala
    (Getting many thoughts to write butCould not write everything I feel sorry da)
    Got glued to these characters. And definitely going to miss these beautiful unique girls.

    Pls come back soon wit h another new one..... Left aloof if no story update from iniyaaaa.....

    Again another ummmmmaaaaaaaauuuuaaaah


    :banana::banana::banana::banana::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2:
    :ciao::ciao::ciao::ciao:
    Another nice treat and trophy to you from all of the followers of Iniyaaaa fan club
    :number_one::number_one::number_one::number_one::number_one:
     
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    Thanks dear :blush:
     
  7. IniyaaSri

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    Oh my God!!! Aarthi darling! thanks a lot for those kisses:smile::smile::smile:
    Such an enthusiastic feedback:smile::smile::smile:
    And its pretty impressive that you have thrown light on thing which no one have touched.
    And yeah you are right about Sruthi. But generally life doesn't work on Logic na.
    Like... if we are good, only good things will happen! There is something else which we will never decode and only that is running this world I suppose.
    So I just left Sruthi and Prabhu to the reader's imagination. May be she got someone who will take good care of her.
    Thank you so much for those kind words dear!!!
    I was smiling and smiling. Thanks once again.
    Thanks for the trophy!!!
    But Iniyaa Flub cub huh....am feeling shy:facepalm:
    Blushing here.
    Thank you so much for your constant love and support dear!!!:kissingheart::kissingheart::kissingheart::kissingheart:
    Sending you lots of love and kisses!
    Stay blessed:relaxed::relaxed::relaxed:
     
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    mriduna Silver IL'ite

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    Standing ovation to your story telling ability and writing style. Loved the climax and the way life turned out for all 4 of them. You have done complete justice to all characters. The last minute twist and change in Jaanvi's life was absolutely lovely.
    I have a special request for you, just like how they show in movies - glimpses of future of each character with kids, behind the scenes, making etc. Can we please get a few more bonus episodes under one of these titles? I am still not ready to say bye to the story or the 4 girls.
     
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    peddadas Platinum IL'ite

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    Iniya,

    You (Writers) are all the lovely/great/wonderful story tellers that I had encountered, but I would sincerely appreciate your regular posts, punctuality, consistently long episodes. I am sure it is not easy in today's world with so many moving parts in life unless we are dedicated to the core we cannot achieve this type of organized execution. I , from bottom of my heart, really would like to thank you for giving us such a lovely story. Thank you for your efforts.

    I am greedy as well, waiting for your next throw :tonguewink:

    --PS
     
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    sathisaran New IL'ite

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    Iniya,

    The story ending was perfect...love it..you are an awesome writer...i am sad that the story has ended..All these four girls were awesome....so great...Thanks a lot for giving us a wonderful story and made us to live in that phase of life with these 4 girls...
     
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