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Begginning or The End - Final Part

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by ghostwriter, Mar 28, 2011.

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  1. May 17, 2011 #41
    ghostwriter

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    Dear Tulips,

    I felt really nice that you asked me the question. I told you that a decent story stays with the reader and I am really really glad that you remembered the story.

    Its absolutely fine to get confused, sometimes while reading a novel even I get confused.

    regards

    GW
     
    ghostwriter, May 17, 2011
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  2. May 20, 2011 #42
    Sofea

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    Hi GW,

    I just came across the final part of the story now so I decided to dig for the earlier parts in the thread. So glad I did that :)

    I love this story. Amazing writing skills you have there. And after reading this, I don't want to address you as a Ghost Writer. I think you're a great writer and wish that you will write more of such wonderful stories in future.

    I love Suja's character. When I was in my college, I had a friend who is just like Arjun- tall, good looking and popular. One day, he told me that he was in love and introduced a rather plain looking girl like Suja as his lover. The moment I saw her, I became so judgmental and started questioning myself on how a good looking guy could fall in love with a plain looking girl like her. But, it was after getting to know the girl that I realized how wonderful a person she is and how they complement one another. That lesson that I learned when I was 20 years old stayed in my mind forever. Never judge a person by their looks for teh beauty of a person is in their hearts rather than their looks. Reading this wonderful story makes me reminisce the wonderful girl I met years earlier. Thank you GW :thumbsup
     
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  3. May 23, 2011 #43
    krk

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    GW,

    I read this final part twice/thrice to feel and enjoy every bit of it. I was somehow expecting this kind of ending since I like nice endings. But the kid thing made the ending all the more beautiful. There can never be a better gift than a kid in anyone's life. I personally believe a relationship lasts only when ppl involved in it admire the inner beauty of the other person... otherwise it is only infatuation of different kinds...

    Great story.. do write many more.

    -krk.
     
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  4. Jun 22, 2011 #44
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    Dear Sofea,

    Wow, that was one great feedback. I have no words to write. I loved the way you wrote back in detail. Your feedback will stay with me for long.

    Thanks a ton again and you just made my day.

    regards

    GW
     
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  5. Jun 22, 2011 #45
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    Dear krk,

    Thanks for liking the story.

    Very well said. In the end its the inner self that counts, the outer beauty ends up in the dust.

    Thanks for such a lovely feedback.

    regards

    GW
     
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  6. Jun 27, 2011 #46
    sapthu02

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    awesome story. i loved the ending,.. lovely narration!!
     
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  7. Nov 15, 2011 #47
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    Dear Saptu02,

    Thanks for the appreciation.

    regards

    GW.
     
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  8. Nov 15, 2011 #48
    Arunarc

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    Hello Ghostwriter
    That was a nice story. With lovely ending, I mean beggining.....
    Many a times men do such mistakes and realises very late, bringing the child in between you made the couple come together.
    Enjoyed reading your story.
     
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  9. Dec 1, 2011 #49
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    Really a nice story......... read the last episode first... have to read the previous episodes
     
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  10. Dec 21, 2011 #50
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    Dear Aruna,

    I am glad to hear that you enjoyed the story. When the readers like you encourage the writers like us, we do get the motivation to write more.

    Thanks a lot for the encouragement.

    regards

    GW
     
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