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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rrg, Sep 26, 2009.

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  1. Oct 12, 2009 #11
    shreyashreyas

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    The way subbu's character was described, i could enact the whole story in my mind with a serial artist acting. The way police people reacted....

    It was really nice sir.
     
    shreyashreyas, Oct 12, 2009
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  2. Nov 13, 2009 #12
    Rrg

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    Dear Sandhya,
    Pleased to note that you enjoyed the story / narration.
    Thanks a tonne.:)
    Cheers!
    Rrg
     
    Rrg, Nov 13, 2009
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  3. Dec 12, 2009 #13
    susri

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    Very nice short story. My dad's character is also like Subbu . :)
     
    susri, Dec 12, 2009
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  4. Dec 13, 2009 #14
    Sriniketan

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    Sir,
    Persistent Subbu wins at last...nice to read it.

    sriniketan
     
    Sriniketan, Dec 13, 2009
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  5. Jan 2, 2010 #15
    shakambari

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    Excellent and interesting narration, RRG Sir.

    It was like viewing the whole happenings from my window!
     
    shakambari, Jan 2, 2010
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  6. Jan 4, 2010 #16
    amihere

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    DEar Rrg, a very good post.First I thought you are narrating how a small temple slowly growed to a popular one with all the
    scenes we find aorund temple premises. Great story:)
     
    amihere, Jan 4, 2010
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  7. Jan 10, 2010 #17
    AadhiSarathy

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    Excellent story...a kind of tale-twist, with a surprise ending! Really loved reading this...! Great work Rrg! :):thumbsup
     
    AadhiSarathy, Jan 10, 2010
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  8. Jan 26, 2010 #18
    RadhaG

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    Enjoyed reading it :)

    ...Radha
     
    RadhaG, Jan 26, 2010
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  9. Jan 26, 2010 #19
    natpudan

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    RRG,

    I don't know how I missed this story.

    Lot of suspense through out.

    Tempel becoming bigger & bigger...

    Hundi going to be looted....

    Beggar turning robber....

    Pookkaari & beggar starting a life...

    Colony members removing Subby from presidency, becos of his nuisance....

    SI booking subbu for nuisance....

    So many possibilities were there but you nicely expressed a common man's social responsibility.

    Please don't stop writing.

    enjoyed it very much.
     
    natpudan, Jan 26, 2010
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  10. Apr 15, 2010 #20
    Rrg

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    Dear Friends,
    Thanks for your mails.
    For a few months now, I could not contribute to this forum due to certain professional & personal committments leaving me with very little time for my hobbies. Pardon the delay in my replying your mails.
    I am relatively free now and have posted a story 'Moondru Kodugal" ondate.
    Hope you would like this as well.
    Cheers,
    Rrg
     
    Rrg, Apr 15, 2010
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