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"You have become a Spoiled Girl"

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by ayyan, Jan 18, 2010.

  1. ayyan

    ayyan New IL'ite

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    Did I touch you, when I saw you first time?
    But you were an innocent girl.
    Did I hurt you, when I saw you next time?
    But you were a cute pretty girl, no?
    Yes, truly you were a cute pretty girl…

    Did I do anything wrong, why did you run away from me,
    But never I had an aim to crush you,
    And never I had an aim to spoil you.…
    Still who did that mistake? You or me?...
    But the “spoiled” has become you only.

    I did have a truthful love and I had a real attraction,
    And I never wanted to spoil you, but still?
    It wasn’t a fault of mine, but was a fault of them?
    Still I ruined your innocence, no?
    But why the “spoiled” has become you only?

    You should have avoided me, or
    I should have avoided you, but.
    Was there any wrongness with us?
    Again we did that same mistake no?
    But why the “spoiled” has become you only?

    You were too younger, than I thought,
    But I too fell in a wonderland, then,
    I can’t say what went in wrong, yes..,
    You didn’t hate any attractions, But
    Why the “spoiled” has become you only?

    I told you all the stories, and
    I gave you all the dreams too,
    You forgot to safeguard you, but
    I should’ve done that for you.
    Still the “spoiled” has become you only.

    You were a girl, with no stories,
    But I made new stories of you, but
    So cruel have I become then no?
    Still I have no new stories, ha…
    But the “spoiled” has become you only.

    It’s all not because of you girl,
    But because of your pretty face.
    I hadn’t had a way out,
    Somewhere to run and escape.
    But why the “spoiled” has become you only.

    You didn’t have any ways to go, god…
    I too knew that very well girl?
    I should’ve done something then,
    But I didn’t have courage to do, ‘then,
    The “spoiled” has become you only.

    Do I have any curse of you?
    No, I know you can’t do that, but
    Why am I writing all this?...
    Only to escape from your curse, no?..No..
    ‘Cus the “spoiled” was you only… girl.

    We should’ve shared the wrong,
    Once they caught us with their laws.
    I should’ve done something good… damn!!!
    I am still unspoiled and good…..am I ?
    And the “spoiled” has become you only.

    (An ode for the unspoiled girls, “I am” is not me…sure, but a few words about a spoiled girl in my vicinity)
     
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  2. wifeandmommy

    wifeandmommy New IL'ite

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    there is a deep meaning in this isnt it?
     
  3. ayyan

    ayyan New IL'ite

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    I hope, a person like you can see that meaning, alle? Thanks smitha for reading and thanks for the very first comment, so fast...ayyan.
     
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    sylvia09 New IL'ite

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    This poem is more complex than your cosmic laws ayyan...all the best
     
  5. ayyan

    ayyan New IL'ite

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    Oh, isn't it? I thought it was a simple...Sylviya, thanks for your continuous support...love...ayyan
     
  6. AmritaPoorni

    AmritaPoorni Bronze IL'ite

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    Nice one with a meaning..
     
  7. AmritaPoorni

    AmritaPoorni Bronze IL'ite

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    Nice one with a meaning..
     
  8. ayyan

    ayyan New IL'ite

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    Thanks for the comment, amritha, love, ayyan
     
  9. star83

    star83 Senior IL'ite

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    Ayyan,

    Nice thought. It has a good meaning

    Sugi
     
  10. ayyan

    ayyan New IL'ite

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    Hay Sugi,
    Welcome again, and thanks for reading and feeling the meaning...ayyan.
     

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