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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rajeni, Jun 2, 2016.

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  1. Jul 27, 2018 #881
    Sachini

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    Good one Rajeni. Like Joe. Kishore was Nethra's ex isnt it? A lil lazy to check n confirm the name going through all episodes.
     
    Sachini, Jul 27, 2018
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  2. Jul 27, 2018 #882
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    Liked the lighter phase of the story amidst all the chaos going on.

    Joe's character brings a smile after a long time in the story.

    Guess Kishore is Nethra's ex. The story surely demands a second time and it's worthy too.
     
    sreeram, Jul 27, 2018
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  3. Jul 28, 2018 #883
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    Wow, I didn't know you've started updating your story again! I missed a good 3 months of your stories by now:disrelieved::disrelieved::disrelieved:

    But it was fun to read so many episodes at the same time! Once again Rajeni, amazing, amazing writing! I don't even feel like I'm merely reading your story. It's like watching a movie unfolding before you! Your writing is so impactful and the characters becone alive in your head :hearteyes:

    And its a nice touch to have Mr. Vasan telling Abhi about Nethra's past only to shift the focus to Nethra who coincidently is also thinking about her past. In which case, we would get to see the past from Nethra's view while Abhi sees it from Mr. Vasan's view. Absolute brilliant move Rajeni! :clap2::clap2::clap2:
     
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    Very interesting... I bit two nails off and have two more left.. saving for the next episode.
     
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  5. Jul 28, 2018 #885
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    Thank you Sachini! Yes Kishore is her ex (even I had to go back and check what I named him :p )
     
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    Thank you dear Priya! Happy that you liked Joe's characterization.

    You made my day!
     
    Rajeni, Jul 28, 2018
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    Welcome back dear Sofea! I am truly surprised and glad to read your feedback. Missed you here! And, thank you so much for this generous feedback about my writing.

    I am excited that you noticed and liked the way I chose to reveal the past differently to Abhi and the readers. I am like :banana:
     
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    Haha! I am glad you have two left and hopefully the others grow back before next to next episode :)

    Thank you Kkrish!!
     
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    Thank you dear Rampuri! Glad that you like it thru Nethra's POV
     
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    Rajeni

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    Thank you dear CM! Glad you like it too!
     
    Rajeni, Jul 28, 2018
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