Dear Rajeni, I used to be a regular in Stories Section years back (not as an author but as a commentator). Due to change of circumstances and life-style (I used to be single then, now I'm a mom to a naughty toddler) I had to abstain myself from coming to IL. Its by chance that I came to Stories Section yesterday. I noted that there's a huge change here, especially with new authors coming up with exciting stories. Its by that same chance as well that I came across your story. I must admit- your story is amazingly intriguing and addictive. Everything about your writing is too wonderful to say in words. They way you molded the lead characters, give life to them and making us feel that they are a part of us. The manner in which you create the mystery around the characters, carefully giving out clues and yet keep us to the edge of our seats...everything is superb to say the least. Like others here, I can't wait to read the rest of your story, in particular, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us. Amidst the busy lifestyle I currently have, your writing came as a fresh breath of air to me. Totally hooked to this now. Keep writing this wonderful piece! Waiting to read the rest in bated breath!