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Whispers Of Love

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Jul 16, 2018.

  1. Preetii

    Preetii Gold IL'ite

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    Hi BB,
    After long time i am giving feedback.
    All theze days i will come & read your episode , read feedback of others & leave...

    But Dev death made me to write :sleepy:
    Its the same comment you are going to receive me from as well, couldn't take dev character missing. As equal like srikanth, jaishankar his character loved by all as the way you portrayed.. Although this is fiction we couldn't take it BB :sleepy::sleepy::sleepy:

    Its clear he is not going to come back. But wondering why you decided so. If readers could adore Dev why not the creator you, but now you changed it( I dont want to use word "you killed the character" - it still pains for us). Wondering what you kept for us more.:shakehead::shakehead:

    Srikanth - Harini - Ramya ???? My guess ramya wont unite with srikanth as she knows how srika loved Harini. The other side of coin to be revealed by Harini. Waiting irresistibly to know her part.:thinking:

    Padmini to be hanged, because of her Dev is killed :rage::rage::rage:
     
  2. blackbeauty84

    blackbeauty84 IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks Preetii for your feedback.
    I'm so happy that all of you loved Dev. When I complete this story I really hope I would have connected all the loose ends hanging now. Next see what Ramya and Harini decides..
     
  3. VidyaSuresh

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    awaiting for the next episode BB.
     
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  4. ammusatheesh

    ammusatheesh Gold IL'ite

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    Oh no...hope Srikanth recovers soon...sometimes we have to accept the fact and Ramya is strong enough to handle it...couldn't digest it
     
  5. blackbeauty84

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    Chapter-40

    Harini
    I was curled up on my bed and it was Nandhini who kept patting my head. I never dreamt Dev, person with whom I have shared so many laughs with is no more. What’s more shocking is Srikanth’s behavior. He accused me of reason behind Dev’s death. If you haven’t been such a fool , Dev would have still be alive. How am I to know Padmini was planning to make a mountain out of mole and file a case on him. Only mistake I did was that I got scared when Padmini threatened me and fled the meeting room along with her. I didn’t seriously think about the repercussions.

    ‘Give him time Hari…’ Nandhini was saying. Mother was at bakery for extended hours as Priya was away.

    ‘But he can’t blame me for what happened. If I could have changed a single thing…’

    ‘Harini..he will realize soon. As you have said many times they were thick friends. It’s normal that he is guilt tripped and showing that anger on you. .’ she convinced. ‘Here have a cup of tea.’ She ordered.

    Mother came a little later and she has bought dinner from outside.

    ‘Oh no..I have cooked something.’ Nandhini said.

    ‘That’s okay.Let’s enjoy. Good news is that your father has agreed for divorce by mutual consent if I’m not going to demand anything from him financially.’ She said.

    ‘Does he have any savings in the first place?’ I asked mom.

    ‘Not as savings..he has some land in the village. I thought if he settles something I will use it for your marriage. Now we will have to save every paise for the marriage.’ She said.

    ‘I’m not getting married..’ I said.

    ‘Now or ever.. weren’t you crying about Srikanth five minutes before?’ Nandhini asked naughtily.

    ‘Any news from Srikanth? Shouldn’t you visit Dev’s house and check on his wife?’ my mother asked.

    I felt ashamed for not thinking about Ramya. Next day while walking to her house from bus stop I saw Sameer and Rajib coming from that direction in his car. He slowed the car, lowered the window and asked

    ‘Harini, visiting Ramya is it?Just give me a minute.’ Sameer said and came near me parking the car in corner.

    ‘How’s Ramya?’ I asked.

    ‘Strong considering what she went through..any news from Srikanth?’ Rajib asked.

    ‘No..I was about to ask you. He didn’t come to office right?’

    ‘His brother says things are pretty bad at his end..seems it has been days since Srikanth ate anything or had a bath. Not sure where this is going to end.’ Sameer said.

    ‘I don’t know what to do..his phone remains unreachable.’ I said.

    ‘I’m planning to visit him if things don’t turn around in a day or two.’ Sameer said.

    When I visited Ramya she was talking about moving on, finding a well paying job and raising Vithuran well. I was bowled by her courage. It was really tough for me in office to remain without company of Dev and Srikanth. One afternoon I couldn’t bring myself to enter into cafeteria, I sat in the bench where I would usually chat with Dev and Srikanth.

    Urvashi came and sat next to me and held my hands.

    ‘Missing Dev is it? I still couldn’t come to terms that he will not be back.’ She sobbed. Look at the number of people crying for you Dev my heart said. We comforted each other and I had lunch with Urvashi.

    ‘Srikanth looked very knocked down that day. He is not back to office yet?’ She asked. I’m not sure how to respond about this.

    ‘He is not in touch..mobile remains unreachable.’I said.

    ‘Don’t tell me it’s almost one week you didn’t speak to him. You didn’t visit your boyfriend?’ she asked. She then bit her lip and said ‘Other day when we were in Dev’s house..I was talking with Srika and he said he is going to ask you again..So I assume you accepted right?’ she asked.

    God this is torturous…I don’t know where I stand with Srikanth now. I wanted to meet him and clear this. I had Sriram’s number and texted him for address.He responded after a long time with the address. I was scared about Srikanth’s dad since he threatened me. But he must also know that my mother is getting separated. I texted my mother that I would be late to home that day. There was another reason I was aching to meet Srikanth.

    I took a cab to Srikanth’s house and was stunned by the size of it. I had to reconfirm the address when security looked at me. Is the security going to let me in? Srikanth’s mobile was still switched off.

    ‘I’m….’

    ‘Harini is it? Sriram has informed me. Go in.’ he said.

    I was wondering where I find Srikanth. No one was in sight.

    ‘Come this way mam. Sir is waiting for you.’ Said someone. I realized he must be a house staff as he was wearing maintenance uniform.

    ‘Which sir?I’m here to meet Srikanth..’ I said sheepishly.

    ‘Sir wants to have a word with you.’ He replied opening me the door.

    ‘Welcome Harini’ Chairman came near the door and smiled at me while I stood transfixed.

    ‘I…’ I blurted something ‘Easy my girl..’ he offered me a chair and sat on another placing a firm grip on the support.

    House staff came in with a wide selection of snacks and coffee.

    ‘Strong coffee without sugar right..’ chairman poured for me and handed me. ‘Well, we could have had a better introduction so I presume you must be shocked.’ He said.

    ‘Shock is too lesser a word..I don’t know how to express it…’ I said.

    ‘You are right’ he laughed ‘Sriram rang me stating you are asking for the address..I thought it would be better if we meet under the circumstances. So I take it Srikanth wasn’t communicative since….’

    ‘Yes sir..’

    ‘No sir here..Down the years we would be family’

    ‘It would take me time to get used to it. I don’t know why Srikanth kept it hidden from me.’

    ‘So that you don’t take a decision based on that…You gave him a tough time before saying yes to him right? Boy, he was almost heartbroken that time’ He smiled while picking up a call.

    From what he was speaking, I could make out he was speaking to Mukund.He finished the call while I asked the question

    ‘Where is Srikanth?’

    ‘At Dev’s house. I just came back from States today afternoon. We went to Dev’s house , Srikanth is helping her with resume. He could be back anytime..’ he said.

    ‘Oh..then I would leave or some back later.’ I said getting up from the chair.

    ‘I have all the time in world for you Harini..Srikanth’s behavior is bit abnormal and mostly he is eaten with guilt. I would work on straightening him out…I know it’s bit tough at your end, but have some patience.’ He said.

    ‘Dad..I have sent the resume to Mukund…’ Srikanth said opening the door. Gosh..He has lost weight in a week and everything about him looked dull. He then looked at me.

    ‘Harini…What are you doing here?’ he asked. There was some angriness in his tone.

    ‘She came searching for you..what is she to think if you remain uncommunicative?’ chairman answered. ‘I’m taking a plunge before dinner. Stay for dinner Harini, he will drop you back.’ Chairman ordered.

    Once he left Srikanth sat in the chair his father was sitting prior. We were sitting silent and the silence unnerved me.

    ‘Srikanth…look I didn’t file the complaint nor was aware of what happened…So can we…’

    ‘Harini look…things are not the same anymore and I have a lot to consider.’ He said.

    ‘Which things?’ I asked.

    ‘You don’t understand or pretending to be..anyways we weren’t even…..I want to go different way..break up ..split…’

    ‘Srikanth…you are not talking sense..’ I cried.

    ‘Don’t make it tough Harini..’

    ‘I love you Srikanth…I can’t forget..may be it’s easier for you to breakup just like that…’ I said raising my voice. His eyes were red when he looked at me.

    House staff knocked the door for something Srikanth got up from his chair.

    ‘Bye Harini..Anna can you please drop her home?’ he asked the house staff.

    ‘No thanks Srikanth. Good bye.’ I stormed out of the house.
     
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  6. aarthi28

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    Aha I expected this. How hari is goi g to take this? Pls don't delay in posting next episode
     
  7. lakshya2018

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    I feel harini's character is bit selfish from the beginning.
    I too feel the same way Srikanth thinking. if she had not gone with Padmini that day. Dev would have been alive.

    May be her character is like ths because of her economical bg. Always want to be in secure side.
     
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  8. peddadas

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    I agree with @lakshya2018 's observation, Srikanth always has to think multiple times from multiple sides. She should be little more matured to handle this, please don't make Srikanth go to her .. she has to understand poor guy's situation..she should think in similar lines of Ramya..saying it is destiny etc., instead of your fault , my fault etc., even now, she could have told him she will wait until he realizes her love... emotional episodes BB..good going!
     
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  9. creativemumma

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    I still have some hopes on Harini- Maybe they would reunite. need something strong to be showcased by harini
     
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  10. Sachini

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    It's sooooooooo sad to miss Dev but otherwise would have been difficult for you too to kill such a sweet character unless it's the necessity. Waiting for twists. Please don't pair Ramya n Srikanth( will history repeat, though Priya was not Jai's friend's wife).
     

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