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Vishmai's Encounters in Life

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Bpremalatha, Dec 13, 2011.

  1. Bpremalatha

    Bpremalatha Gold IL'ite

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    Hi all,
    The story below is edited my VJB, I am grateful for her help..and lovely time she spent for me...:)

    Would expect for your response towards this story....

    A small boy(Vishmai) about 12 years was walking desolately on the streets....On reaching the spot near his house he breaks down uncontrollably calling to his mom.......

    How different this morning was the boy had just delivered paper n milk had the meagre but yummy breakfast which his mother had prepared, gone off to school....,on the way back from school ..He saw Ma carrying grocery bags he wanted to help her, got excited and started to run towards her ...she seeing him ran, made signs to come slow he dont know what made him, he just wanted to run to her...she also panicked and started to run towards him, A huge monstrous lorry like Yama dev all of suddenly came rashly n within second it had hit his mother....grocery bag still clutched in her hands....Her eyes just gazed at him pitifully before she lost conscious...

    The driver had stopped the lorry seeing the victim ... he wanted to hurry back n drive but there were some people coming running towards the spot seeing it he had a flash so he jumped down yelling at the top of the voice....

    "Cant you see the lorry what was that hurry for?"
    Acted shocked to see the woman in bleeding slowly so he called those running towards in saying this woman has been hit there is no time we need to take her to hospital....While I was crying Ma Ma....

    To his luck no one had witnessed the incident except the boy but the boy was shell shocked to respond to anything taking advantage of these he took the body and the boy in his vehicle and went to Government hospital and took her straight to Junior doctor whom he knew..n called him aside n talked something to which the doctor nodded the doctor checked the pulse who said she has died of shock....
    The driver gave something to the doctor and went inside and came with a paper the driver took the body n me again in the lorry the boy kept asking "Please treat my mom..." But it fell on deaf ears the driver took me aside n said "Boy look dont make scene if you do police will send you to jail" "Your mother is dead so dont make scene lets bury her ...People will die some day she died today" Thus saying he took the mother to crematorium n had her cremated, boy was just looking dazed in a matter of 5 hours the boy became Orphan............."Oh Ma Oh Ma how can you leave me...how can you leave me alone in this huge world..."
     
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  2. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    that was horrible incident.. just couldn't take it............:(
     
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  3. Megalife

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    Hi Bpremalatha
    Touching post!....there are many monsters like this dr., driver amidst us! Keep writing!
    Mega
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Oh what a scary incident Premalatha......
    How can people be so rude...... It is really a touchy post a very sad one.
     
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    Thank you Sapthu... for the feedback... :)
     
  6. Bpremalatha

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    Thank you Megha for the feedback...
     
  7. Bpremalatha

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    Thank you aruna.. for your feedback.. :)
     
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    vjbunny IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Prema...
    Very touching story......Keep writing dear...
     
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    Dear Prema,

    A good start...very touching story....


    Shanti
     
  10. Bpremalatha

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    Thank you :) Shanti..
     

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