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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by ILoveTulips, Oct 19, 2019.

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    Hi stayblessed, I always love to read your summary. It gives that satisfied feeling that the intended emotions are observed and felt by the readers. I am glad you found the story interesting, hope you will have the same feeling when you finish reading it.
    Thank you for your support and appreciations @stayblessed..
     
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    Ahh, a movie! That would be really good, wouldn't it? An actress like Mrs. Elizabeth from Jenma natchathiram as Lizzy! That would be really a dream come true!
    Thank you Saritha @peddadas for this pleasant thought. Come soon and read the rest of the story. :)
     
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    Dear Kamala mam @kkrish, I am so very happily surprised to see you here. Hope you are well.
    Happy to read your comments and glad to know that you are enjoying the story.

    ILT
     
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    Sorry that was too long a wait @Tamrakshar. :blush:
     
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    I am reading and re-reading and re-re-reading your comments dear Sof @Sofea . Everytime I post, I envisage your comments, 'how would Sof like this episode?' :kissingheart:. I am so grateful to receive such an overwhelming response from you dearie. I will have a print of this comment and stick it in my home- your words will bring me smile and warm my heart and make my day. Love you dearie...
     
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    Dear SpringB, thank you so much for your interest. I am so happy that you have mentioned this story in another thread and also thought this story is worth to be nominated for this month's Finest Post selection.
    I hope you read my explanation for the queries you had in mind and it is convincing.

    Thank again @SpringB
     
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    @Tamrakshar, Thank you for the compliments. I know there could be lots of grammar mistakes, I kept switching from past and present tense in the narration, in some places I didnt know whats the right one to have. Thats something I have to learn. Sorry to know the ending is disappointing, and thanks for the idea of alternate ending. I will think about it. Not sure I can publish this story again, as it's already out in the internet, but I am still happy to have found readers such as yourself.

    Thanks once again.. :)
     
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    Hi @blackbeauty84 , thank you for your compliments, glad you liked the story.. :)
     
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    There is this book "Rebecca" by Daphne Du Maurier where we never know the protagonist's (narrator of the story) name.
    I thought, just a passing thought, that @ILoveTulips also followed that trend. :)
     
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    @ILoveTulips , what an engrossing story!
    Loved it. The story line, the description, the imagination - awesome!
     
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