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The Night And The Stars - A Journey Towards The Dark

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Dec 8, 2016.

  1. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri Platinum IL'ite

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    Hi Varsha!!! I have a friend of mine in your name.:grinning:
    Have read my stories is it....Thank you so much:blush::blush::blush:
    Hope you liked my previous stories:grinning:
    And keep sharing your thoughts on this story as well.
    Thanks once again:blush::blush::blush:
    Happy weekend:grinning:
     
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    IniyaaSri Platinum IL'ite

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    Hey Lata darling!:blush:
    Thank you so much!
    Yeah...Thats what Jaanu is confused about. :rolleye:
    Lets wait and watch:thumbsup:
    Happy weekend dear:blush:
     
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    Iniya next episode......
    V r waiting ........
     
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    Sorry! I have just traveled and with jet lag now:pensive:.
    So next episodes will be slightly delayed.
    Have kept the next episode ready and will be posting within today!
    Thanks for your love:blush:
     
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    Sorry yaar, no problem
     
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    Hey! No need to be sorry dear:grinning:
    Am posting the next episode now:smiley:
     
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    Episode:27

    The car before her moved and at once Jaanu turned off her scooter quietly. The two wheelers beside her were standing as such…

    Soon she could hear horns from behind.

    “come on….move…” she heard someone shouting from behind…

    She got down from her scooter and pretended to kick her scooter hard….

    She made it in such a way that everyone thought her vechile has got repaired all of a sudden.

    Slowly she moved her vehicle to the side and started kicking hard.

    The two two wheelers were standing as such blocking the other vechile and everyone behind started shouting and the traffic police started walking towards them.

    The men were wearing helmets and their faces were covered with a hand kerchief.

    Seeing the police walking towards them, both started their two wheelers and drove away swiftly

    After few minutes Jaanu slowly took her scooter and drove to her home…

    She hurried in parking her two wheeler and ran fast to her main door.

    She gasped as her mom opened the door

    “what happened Jaanu” Chithra asked with tension

    “nothing maaa.” She kept her bag and closed herself inside her bathroom

    “what will I tell her now…”

    But I am sure that these people are not the ones who are ready for anything. They are afraid of the police. So they are weak. They are not very strong or not a big background is involved.

    Jaanu tried to decipher.

    “How will I figure out….” She leaned her head on the closed bathroom door

    She closed her eyes and all she could hear was her gasp.

    Soon she started feeling afraid even in that loneliness.

    At once she heard Chithra banging the door heavily

    “How long….what happened to you…you are hiding something from me…. “ – Chithra asked as Jaanu opened the door.

    “nothing mom….fell down from scooter. Nothing happened to me…..Dnt tell you as you will get scared…” Jaanu wiped her face and went towards her room

    Jaanu tried calling Chaaru’s guy Mano and again it was not reachable.

    “What about him….where is he…..” Jaanu sat on her bed.

    May be he himself kidnapped her and pretending to me? Jaanu was thinking hard.

    Next day she went to office and turned on her system.

    The other three girls gathered there and Jaanu depicted what happened and the others panicked listening to everything.

    “Jaanu…. The other day you were saying that you shouldn’t get nervous or gasp….Your lungs might get strained and all. Why do you get involved in this….” – Rathna

    There was no reply from Jaanu.

    “Its these many months she got lost and there is no news from her. The day before Diwali was the last day she was available. After that no one knows what happened to her.” – Jaanu

    “Jaanu….Have you uploaded the files in the drive. Am waiting” – Zaheer interrupted the discussion.

    “Sorry Zaheer! Will upload now. I forgot” – Jaanu opened the drive to upload the file. After that Jaanu tried to concentrate on her work.

    It was break time. Jaanu thought of going for a short walk outside so that she could relive her stress.

    She pressed the lift button and it was not working. She started walking down the stairs alone.

    She heard someone talking over phone softly.

    She slowed her footsteps to listen whose voice was that.

    It seemed to be very familiar.

    “Yes Yes…Do as I say…Never open your mouth about Chaaru to anyone else. Remember?”

    “Idiot! Yes. We might get into trouble. Daily these girls are talking about Chaaru. Seems they have given a strong police complaint as well”

    After hearing all these, Jaanu couldn’t resist and she peeped slowly to see who was talking over phone.

    She took her sandals in her hands and walked down the steps slowly.

    She stood beside the wall and pepped silently to see who was standing there.

    It was Zaheer talking over the phone

    “Yes Yes!!! Be careful” he said over phone.

    Jaanu’s heart skipped a moment....
     
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    wow..unexpected twist...
     
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    :smiley:
     
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    @IniyaaSri , somehow, I felt when this guy Zaheer interfered with the girsl conversation, that he is one among the culprit. ;) ;) ;)
     
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