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THE FROSTED HEART - My First Short Story

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by SharmilaBanu, Dec 30, 2011.

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  1. Dec 30, 2011 #11
    vidukarth

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    that was a very nice story
     
    vidukarth, Dec 30, 2011
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  2. Dec 31, 2011 #12
    Viswamitra

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    Love transcends time and space. You do not have to be next to kith and kin to feel the love. The time does not make you forget and the distance does not deter. Wonderful story and keep up the good work.

    Viswa
     
    Viswamitra, Dec 31, 2011
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  3. Jan 2, 2012 #13
    raji2678

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    Nice story. Pls write more
     
    raji2678, Jan 2, 2012
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  4. Jan 2, 2012 #14
    knbg

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    Hi Sharmila...
    That's a lovely piece dear......!!!
    for the few minutes, you took me with you......!!!
    Looking forward to more lovely works from you......
    Happy New year!
     
    knbg, Jan 2, 2012
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  5. Jan 2, 2012 #15
    SharmilaBanu

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    Thanks sapthu02,special,vidukarth,Viswa,raji,knbg for reading and sharing your comments
     
    SharmilaBanu, Jan 2, 2012
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  6. Jan 2, 2012 #16
    Arunarc

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    Nice story Sharmila
    It is this ego in all humans that we lack to show our love to our loved ones, let it be parents or our siblings. Once we have a small fight we don't want on our own to go and tell sorry.
    But life is too short for this ego into us we need to kill that, and patch up immediately or we will repent for it life long.
     
    Arunarc, Jan 2, 2012
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  7. Jan 3, 2012 #17
    Sofea

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    A heart-warming tale Sharmila! Don't stop writing. Would love to read more stories from you :)
     
    Sofea, Jan 3, 2012
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  8. Jan 3, 2012 #18
    iniyamalar

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    That was beautiful dear.
    Amazingly simple yet immersive.

    Please do write more.
     
    iniyamalar, Jan 3, 2012
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  9. Jan 5, 2012 #19
    shashiv

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    A very nice and touching story...



    Shanti
     
    shashiv, Jan 5, 2012
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  10. Apr 2, 2012 #20
    preethiitech

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    that was a heart-touching story.. Beautifully written..
     
    preethiitech, Apr 2, 2012
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