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Stay With Me!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jan 23, 2012.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Be it a harsh winter
    Or a sweltering summer,
    When you are with me
    Its always spring for me.

    A thousand rupees dinner
    Or the one at roadside
    Taste so much better
    When you are by my side.

    A fine textured suit
    Or a casual jean and tee
    Sound the same to me
    When I walk with thee.

    A gentle sound of laughter,
    Or a rare drop of tear
    Mean the world to me.
    Please do stay with me.

    Your hands are slender,
    And your touch finer.
    I always feel smaller
    Before you, my dear.

    If you do not feel
    Like what I do of you,
    Don't worry for you will
    Be soon feeling new!
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Who is this person Srinivasan do send her across let me also feel the spring as it is very cold here, very badly in need of a change in climate.....hehehe

    Nice wordings, even if she doesn't feel anything at present is sure to feel it very soon, and experience something new. As always hats off to your poems....
     
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    Hi Aruna,
    Every time I write nowadays, I wonder whether I am already adding up my posts to that 18000 odd unanswered posts, you know? And thanks for your continuous support and nice feedback. -rgs
     
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    I Cant write any fb for this RGS. Just enjoying the feel in the poem... simply good

    And how can you think that you are adding up to the unanswered posts.. while we are here enjoying your writings..
     
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    Thanks for your motivation and support Pallavi4Me. Its just that I write a bit too much at times and like an eager child, expecting and at times demanding feedback. -rgs
     
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    Nicely written poem on Love.
     
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    Thanks for visiting this thread and appreciating it Latha. -rgs
     

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