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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BhumiBabe, Sep 20, 2018.

  1. BhumiBabe

    BhumiBabe Platinum IL'ite

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    The words aren’t there
    To describe ‘nothing’
    I try, again and again
    But it’s quite elusive
    As if it never existed,
    As if I was just imagining it, all in my head

    But it’s real, I swear
    The nothingness I feel
    After days and weeks of fretting
    This nothing is the calm in the middle of the storm
    It’s disturbing in a way, because for this instant
    It’s as if nothing at all is wrong
     
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  2. Lalithambigai

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    @BhumiBabe The moment of Surrender beautifully put :clap2:

    Reading your poem reminded me of the moment Draupadi let's Go and Krishna takes over. Till the moment we struggle we are relying only on our limited human capabilities but that moment when we let go and let God, it's like the Universe has got your back :) We can say, in this context, from that nothingness comes everything that follows. So be it for you as well:thumbsup:
     
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    It's a bit open to interpretation. The nothingness, to me, is the dark hole of emotions, during a conflict.
     
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