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MY TRYST WITH LOVE(part4--final)

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by mums, Jan 23, 2012.

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  1. Jan 23, 2012 #11
    zingy

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    Well written and conclusion was even better .
    love the way you connected puppy.
    Keeep writing dear :)

    I hate sandy
     
    zingy, Jan 23, 2012
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  2. Jan 23, 2012 #12
    mums

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    Thanks dear.
    Happy that my conclusion was better.
     
    mums, Jan 23, 2012
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  3. Jan 23, 2012 #13
    g3sudha

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    Very nice
    is this a story or real incidence
    very touching

    rosy
    where is ur comment
     
    g3sudha, Jan 23, 2012
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  4. Jan 23, 2012 #14
    lali31

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    Good one.Nice and different ending
     
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  5. Jan 23, 2012 #15
    Arunarc

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    Hello Mums
    Read all the 4 parts.....there was great improvement in each and every episode. The story was excellent. It was funny, emotional and sad too, a mixture of many feelings.
    When the life span of the dog is just 30 to 40 years how can that poor puppy stay with you for 70 years. Bringing this puppy incident in middle this post has got it's attraction.
    Hope we will get to read next one soon from you.
     
    Arunarc, Jan 23, 2012
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  6. Jan 23, 2012 #16
    Arunarc

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    Dear Friends
    Do keep the conversation to the Original post. I don't want to see the posts going off the track like you dearies did in part 1 and part 2.

    If the post is not related to the OP your post will be deleted.
     
    Arunarc, Jan 23, 2012
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  7. Jan 23, 2012 #17
    mums

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    Thanks for feed back Sudha.
     
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    mums

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    Thanks for your fed back dear.
     
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    mums

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    Thanks a lot for giving your feed back Ma'am.
    I thought of living for 70years so wanted Puppy till that age.
     
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  10. Jan 23, 2012 #20
    swaran

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    Hello Mums...

    really a wonderful cute story ofcourse with a very nice message...i liked it a lot...
    a very nice attempt
    thanks for writing and keep writing :)
    all the best!!!!!!
     
    swaran, Jan 23, 2012
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