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Miss you..

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chweetchoyee, Dec 19, 2011.

  1. chweetchoyee

    chweetchoyee Gold IL'ite

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    Things are not the same when you were
    Things are not the same when you weren't

    Miss you would be short
    Love you would be not enough

    I entered the house but didn't find you behind
    realized you have left, sat on the floor few minutes with sad

    I fight with you when you you are around
    I laugh with you in good times

    But, when you are not around its not the same
    I need you now, next to me, just sit and watch movies like we do
    fight with pop-corns and pulling each other with one or two

    Lay down and be lazy with our endless talk
    just hold your hand and be with you till my hairs turns gray..

    PS - Hey you know I color my hair.

    ( my first attempt but true.. I miss him)

    Choyee
     
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  2. ILoveTulips

    ILoveTulips IL Hall of Fame

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    Very sweet poem Choyee.
     
  3. chweetchoyee

    chweetchoyee Gold IL'ite

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    thank you for liking dear.
     
  4. vidraghu

    vidraghu Platinum IL'ite

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    Very nice one choyee! Great attempt...
     
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    sarajara Gold IL'ite

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    WOW Nice one Choyee!!!

    And What a coincidence.. Looks like its been written for me:)

    Away from my DH.. miss him badly.. and of course " i color my hair too " :))

    Jokes apart.. you are too good Choyee.. Keep penning down your thoughts!
     
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    manjubashini IL Hall of Fame

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    . Touching lines choyee. Very nice.
     
  7. chweetchoyee

    chweetchoyee Gold IL'ite

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    Thanks dear..

    It's a great saying.. Pyar main gadha bhi Kavi banjatha hain.. Wait I am not telling I am gadha, don't laugh now.
     
  8. chweetchoyee

    chweetchoyee Gold IL'ite

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    I like your dp a lot, that's my mobile wallpaper.. Hellooo kitty right. Hey thanks for liking
     
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    priya23 Senior IL'ite

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    hi choyee

    very touching.
     
  10. priya23

    priya23 Senior IL'ite

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    hi choyee

    very touching.
     

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