Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Oct 17, 2019.
Thanks YellowMango for your feedback.
Many Many thanks Mistt. Yeah I too have read about many such incidents
Thanks Lakshya. That would have been a nice angle too
Totally unexpected. you have a knack of giving a wonderful twist.
First of all, congratulations BB for presenting us a short psycho-thriller! Your style is very good, and you shake the mind of a reader vigorously at the very end with twists and turns.
Secondly, this is not mere imagination, as this has happened on numerous occasions in the recent past. An unmarried guy kept the dead body of his sister, who too was unmarried, with him for months. A man kept the dead body of his mother in a freezer, and continued to draw her pension using her LTI.
Finally, I wonder why you have so much of fascination for the name Rahul as the main character in this kind of stories!
Maybe Shah Rukh Khan is her favorite actor..
Expected unexpected twist Feel sad for Rahul and happy abt his love towards his mom but sick of his manager but it is so very true in the corporate world don't know for whom we are working Loved the way you captured Rahul's anxiety and play was very realistic