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Lived Life Through His Whispers Now Through His Eyes

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by sunkan, May 1, 2008.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    My usual lonely walk through the beach

    Took a different hue today,
    The sea turned blue with all so clear
    It looked like a dreamy date.
    Felt nature wooing me with a love filled eye

    Did I see some planets high
    So near and large at sight
    The sand I feel so smooth and light
    The sun with soothing rays on flight
    With a lovely pink shade painted alright

    The sparkle of the galaxy so clear and near to me
    Are they giving me a message?
    Of poignant moment in my life
    When love is shining through my eyes
    Lived all life through his [dad's]whispers now through his eyes...sunkan


    this is the second poem there
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Your Second poem is also great Sunkan
    walking alone on the beach all alone, always have lovely whispers, the cool breeze blowing, singing into ur ears. I always enjoyed these beautiful walks along the beaches
     
  3. sunkan

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    yes here this man has walked many a time with his father as he was blind
    and now after his father's death for the first time he sees with his father's eyes what all he had described so it is more spl to him..sunkan
     
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    Dear Sunkan,

    It was very touching and the picture as always suits your words so well.

    Poornima
     
  5. sunkan

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    thanku poornima..sunkan
     
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    MeenLoch Silver IL'ite

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    Lived thru whispers, now thru eyes....Awesome

    Another aspect - Hardly do we connect to nature so deeply.
    For example, I am sure we ll come across so many people who are thinking about the plan for the rest of the day, where to go, what to cook and what to do.

    Can we hear what the nature says ? Beautifully portrayed.
     
  7. sunkan

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    yes meenloch
    we can only thing is u need to be silent in mind too to recognise their speech this is a competition poem.for the week and the other is the kaleidoscopic drive..sunkan
     

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