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Live Long, Be Happy, But Don't Do That

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  1. ChennaiExpress

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    Poem is inspired based on my desire to find my niche in arts (painting, writing, learning languages) and earning a living (computers, engineering, advanced engineering degrees) and make my Father's dead dreams come true

    Poem is out of my frustrations I am feeling right now. For past hour I was having a circular discussion and it didn't seem to end ...... Poem is an abstract of this conversation

    Right now I found an excuse to replace the laptop in my work bag with my paint set to do at lunch ......
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    Live Long
    Be Happy
    But Don't Do
    That

    Does it Earn you
    Money

    Does it Earn you
    Friends

    Does it Earn you
    Respect

    Build Yourself
    You Are Young
    Have Ambitions

    But You are
    Not Interested

    Your Approach
    Is Wrong

    Live Long
    Be Happy
    But Don't Do
    That

    Are you Sure
    You are Interested
    In That

    How many times a
    Day
    Do you think of that

    Why has your interested
    Waned
    For that

    If you are truly
    Passionate

    You won't care about food
    You won't care about sleep
    You won't care about counting
    Sheep

    Live Long
    Be Happy
    But Don't Do
    That

    Now is the
    Time to Build
    Yourself

    Now is the
    Time to Build
    Your Financial
    Nest Egg

    Are you sure
    You are interested
    in
    That

    You won't find
    Your interest in
    One day

    You have an Ocean
    You can decide which Fish
    You can be

    Some people strike it big
    Due to talent

    Some people strike it big
    Due to luck

    Some people keep searching
    And are forever stuck


    Live Long
    Be Happy

    God Wants you to
    Live Long

    Doesn't matter whether
    Happy
    Sad
    Or somewhere
    In between

    Search for your
    Niche

    Don't search for
    Your Niche

    Your Niche
    Comes Naturally

    But what if
    Something else is
    Your Niche

    Live Long
    Be Happy
    But Don't do
    That

    Keep doing
    What interests you
    Take an interest
    To Delve Deeper

    Go beyond the
    Interest
    Learn the "art" and "math"
    Behind your Interest

    Live Long
    Be Happy
    But Don't do
    That

    I'll be ready for dinner in
    An Hour
     
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    :hello:Merely Living long does not guarantee one would live happily and it may lead to leading a vegetate life. long life means you delve deep and find your unique talent which remains latent as you were busy in the materialistic world for bread and butter. those who had hobby live long happily. many celebs attribute their secret of their longevity and happiness to pursuing their hobby or pick up interest in playing music. recent short essay on last sunday issue of the hindu projects this idea very well. You have nicely put forth the same idea in your lovely poem. Regards.
     
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    Exactly!

    I think my real talents are latent and are covered by
    1. Financial desired
    2. Desire for love and respect
    3. Obligation to family's well-being, i.e. bring my Dad's dreams hopes and ambitions back to life.
    4. Wanting to finish what I started.

    Really great way of explaining that!
     
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    :hello:Thanks for compliments. All the best and Godspeed for what ever you wished for yourself and family. God Bless Us All.
     
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