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@GeetaKashyap Lovely poem on life.
Life is like a Honey comb.To taste the sweetness we have to cross many hurdles.
Where there is love injuries are nothing and finally we get what we like.
Superp Geeta

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Dear geets,
A thought provoking poem or shall I say collection of lovely words which sums up this mega event called “LIFE”....

Life is everything that happens within, with and around us, in this we see, hear, experience and learn many things... Life to me means to keep moving on without holding any past grudges, like some wise person once told, “there is nothing new in the past, no matter how many times you visit....”
Life is fragile, unpredictable and interesting and unique....
Live and let live....
Sorry geets for a lengthy reply....

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periamma said: ↑

@GeetaKashyap Lovely poem on life.
Life is like a Honey comb.To taste the sweetness we have to cross many hurdles.
Where there is love injuries are nothing and finally we get what we like.
Superp Geeta
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Well said, periamma. There is a lot to learn from your experience and wisdom.

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Dear geets,
A thought provoking poem or shall I say collection of lovely words which sums up this mega event called “LIFE”....

Life is everything that happens within, with and around us, in this we see, hear, experience and learn many things... Life to me means to keep moving on without holding any past grudges, like some wise person once told, “there is nothing new in the past, no matter how many times you visit....”
Life is fragile, unpredictable and interesting and unique....
Live and let live....
Sorry geets for a lengthy reply....
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Well said, Nandu.
(Was the last line necessary?)
Though much of life is what we make of it, there are also factors beyond our control. As you quoted, past should only be a guiding factor but cannot pervade our present and future. I appreciate your wisdom beyond years.

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GeetaKashyap said: ↑

Well said, Nandu.
(Was the last line necessary?)
Though much of life is what we make of it, there are also factors beyond our control. As you quoted, past should only be a guiding factor but cannot pervade our present and future. I appreciate your wisdom beyond years.
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Haha. Ok geets recalled the last line
Yes, I completely agree.... there are many factors beyond our control, guess we can overcome those by controlling ourselves from within.... yea it’s a tedious task, but worth the effort and time.

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GeetaKashyap said: ↑

Life

What’s life all about?

So many feelings

That a bunch of words can’t express,

So many moments

That a lifetime can’t hold,

So many memories;

That may be sweet or bitter at times,

So many thoughts;

That may be euphoric or saddening.

Life means impermanence.

Moments tick away,

Today becomes yesterday,

Days turn into nights

And time waits for none.

Life’s a fleeting arena of

Triumphs and failings,

Love and hatred

And it moves on waiting for none.

Life is uncertain.

It’s a mirage at times

Or a hazy labyrinth.

Yet it’s all about hope;

To build dreams and achieve,

It’s an assurance of a better tomorrow.

Life is also about miracles;

Believable or unbelievable

But definitely unfathomable!

All that life needs is

A safety net woven by

Unfailing threads of love

And faith, toughened by

Heartfelt and selfless

Prayers of kindred souls.

Lucky is a life that realises

To love and be loved is better than

All the treasures in this world.

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Fine choice of words revealing humdrum of mundane life very nicely broghtout in this poem giving a feeling that these words addressed to one who is brooding about "many a slip between the cup and..."
2. One feels instant and reciprocation of love between him or her and the pet animal tamed.
Thanks for sharing the core truth and the necessity.
Regards.

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Thyagarajan said: ↑

Fine choice of words revealing humdrum of mundane life very nicely broghtout in this poem giving a feeling that these words addressed to one who is brooding about "many a slip between the cup and..."
2. One feels instant and reciprocation of love between him or her and the pet animal tamed.
Thanks for sharing the core truth and the necessity.
Regards.
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Sorry for the delayed response as I had missed this notification. Thanks a lot for your kind feedback.

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Sorry for the delayed response as I had missed this notification. Thanks a lot for your kind feedback.
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Thanks.
2. But that is life when we plan to do too many things ; one may have many miles to go through the woods and do not look back with receding successes and failures till he or she continue to perform to the best of ability adding feathers to the cap(s) - like media painting etc.
3. Trust you caught up with sister SUPRAJA WHOSE STORY concluded and posted last sat.
God bless.

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Thanks.
2. But that is life when we plan to do too many things ; one may have many miles to go through the woods and do not look back with receding successes and failures till he or she continue to perform to the best of ability adding feathers to the cap(s) - like media painting etc.
3. Trust you caught up with sister SUPRAJA WHOSE STORY concluded and posted last sat.
God bless.
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I am yet to catch up with Supraja, I shall catch up soon.

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A wonderful poem on What is Life about.

Life is full of suspense...We may not know what is in store....Enjoy each and every moment of life if possible because we may not get these days back.

Now I am enjoying the motherhood.I love my DS much more than anything.These days will not come back for sure...So cherishing each and every moment.

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