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Hark! New Year Has Come!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by nuggehallipankaja, Nov 12, 2005.

  1. nuggehallipankaja

    nuggehallipankaja New IL'ite

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    Poem by NUGGEHALLIPANKAJA
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    sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
    Whil e alone............
    Memories of all hues hovering,
    TRailing,

    Like shadows, lingering

    Lengthening,

    Day by day, night by night,

    Minute by minute,

    Merging

    Slowly...........unto stillness

    Eerie.......divine of dusk

    Our shore,,,,,,,,,,,


    Grandchildren say-

    Dreams of yesternight

    Mingle with hopes

    Of morrow morn;

    Dawn glitters

    With stars along the path

    Strewn with dewdrops and buds

    Fresh from birth-bath,

    Smiling,

    With ecstasy divine!



    "SUN", the life-giver says-

    From ages and ages,

    Have I given anew,

    Dawns and dawns!

    Aeons and oceans,

    Earth
    poem has not been typed fully. please delete.












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    Last edited: Nov 14, 2005
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  2. Sharada

    Sharada Senior IL'ite

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    Is Pankaja taking poetic licence too far? What are those lines and sss in the middle? I think she should resend the poem and end it properly. The word earth at the end made me dizzy wondering what it could mean!
    sharada
     

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