"Golden moments of Life" - One more love story

Iniya just now i read your Thanks message.Good gesture

 

Hi
Iniya first of all I need to thank u for giving such an awesome story cum reality life for us.I read in 2 days the complete episode.ha ha I m telling Golden Moments of Life dear.And it is mind blowing I dint even thought it was a story it make me felt that I was in between the characters.Such a nice narration with emotions too.

I have to say this really u did the at most justice to every character and no one will ever think that this is ur first story. ((Don't say outside ok)).

The important thing which I saw in your story is
1.U have the character very live and they r dng their part well.its marvellous keep it up
2.I have read many stories in both lang(my mother tongue as well as English) and I a have seen many villains and negative thought people in that.but to my surprise I dint day any such character in ur story.Nice dear.it U know whenever we read or watching movie it should give pleasure that we forget our worries & sadness & I saw & felt the same while I read this. Follow this for future too.
3.I think personally too u r an optimist.

Finally thank so much keep rocking waiting for ur next story once u finish up with Arranged marriages vs Love marriages.

 

Hi iniya..though I were never active commenting your stories am always an ardent fan of your writing I completed reading golden moments of life in only two nights waking late..loved it to the coreloved every bit of it dear
Felt bit revolutionary kinda narration by putting most of the interaction between renu and karan through mobile conversation and loved the way u did that.
I want to mention every part of all your episodes but just because don't wanna consume much space..will just add one..tat act of Lakshmi offering tea infront of her husband's photo made me more emotional
I am really wondering how you are able to picture all sort of people so vividly..Here when describing Renu it was always her kohled eyes and simple conservative dressing style and Rachna in Love vs arranged mrg with all sorts of dressing best suits to her class..have you done any phd in observing people..
Good feel to read the happy ending of the story...keep rocking...expecting more from you

May be irrelevant here but please break the suspense in rachna and pooja's life..the suspense is too intense to me that I got to think over it all the day..pls iniya can't wait anymore

 

Hi @IniyaaSri .... Awesome !! Wonderful !! Most Lively story is this beautiful creation of yours

I happened to notice this thread just on Monday and was so addicted to read the story - I finished just within 2 days..

Woowww... I was literally living inside Renu's life and all her intricate thoughts, characterization is beyond the virtuality..

I was not at all reading any love stories till now, untill I came across this lovely "Golden moments"-- Kudos to choose the most apt title...

It's a winning story that you should publish and gain royalty for an appealing story

The detailed features of Renu, the situations, her blushing feelings, the messages between Karan & Renu are excellently framed..

Really I feel that I have missed this type of love in my college days, also I should also have met a guy of Karan's character... Superb!

Congrats dear!
Waiting to read more creations from you

 

Very nice story dear i have become your great fan i have fallen for your writing style :-D