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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Feb 23, 2012.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Gazing through a window,
    Lost in deeper thoughts,
    Lies a worthless minnow
    You ignored and gone past.

    Do you know what he has?
    A priceless possession!
    A hymn of lovely thoughts
    On his inspiration!

    "Perhaps thats all he has!",
    You may thus conclude!
    Sorry dear, but he has
    More than this interlude.

    Give him a chance to speak!
    It will be all about you.
    His life would be so bleak,
    If he's ignored by you.

    Like those precious drops
    Of dew upon green grass,
    Disappearing very soon,
    He may just vanish too.
     
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    Thanks Megalife, for adding this post to your likes. -rgs
     
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    Lovely poem, RGS!

    p.s. for some reason...the moment i saw the title 'faster' in 'recent posts' on the right side of this webpage, i couldn't help guessing it had to be yours!!
     
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    Thanks Rheaa, for your appreciation. Right now, I am a bit stunned to see how you associated my name with that title, but feel happy about it. -rgs
     
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    what should I say after reading this RGS................................... Still Thinking..

    It has such emotions in it.... just could not stop myself reading it again and again...
     
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    Thanks a lot Pallavi4Me, for your nice feedback. Your fbs really motivate me a lot, you know? -rgs
     
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    Hello Rgs,

    Too good...i really envy ur thought process...

    -parineetha-
     
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    Thanks Parineeta, for your appreciation. :) -rgs
     

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