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Buried Memories - Episode 22 - Part 1

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  1. sapthu02

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    Episode 22
    Part 1


    What…. Wah… What did I hear..? Anni.. Did Tarun call me Anni. Did he address me as Anni.. Anni is a position that holds a place next to a mother. Did he mean I am his Anni….. Tara was lost in her thoughts. She couldn’t believe her ears of what she heard. As tears rolled from her eyes she stood like a statue. Tarun had a casual look. Did he ever forget her? Or is he trying to taking a revenge on her for what she has done to him..

    Was that a punishment for not listening to him ? Was that because she didn’t even give him time to explain? Was that because she treated him like a piece of**** and walked away from his life leaving him behind with tears? Why did he tell that word? Why did he call her Anni… she was just buring with rage and anger. Her eyes were filled with tears and anger.

    Nevertheless, how was that possible that none other than Tarun could notice her anger and everyone was just normal. The house hold work was just as usual. Tara’s kids and Shanthi’s grand children were taken the fields. Arun, varun and Neeraj were busy talking their own stories and cracking jokes. After all the friends have met after a long time. Few of their common friends were on the way to this village who were to be guided to this place. So the three friends had left to pick them up. So almost 3 cars have gone out of the shed.

    Neeraj’s dad Varadarajan and Shankar were busy and involved in family and political talks. What else can we expect from the senior people to talk about other than business and other kinds. Seetha and Shanthi and few more relatives were busy in the kitchen and also involved in the mother in law talks and gossips.. are they to be excluded from the list.
    Vanitha, Vaishnavi and Reetha were in Reetha’s room to talk their story. Now that Tara was left alone in the hall. Tarun was a normal man and he was just fine and not even a glance on Tara to even smile at a person whom he had loved and lived with. Vijay and Arjun felt that they have to be given some space to speak to each other and that too that was the right time. No one was around. But Abirami was around and hanging around with Tarun all the time.

    Tara was sure that she will never get a chance to speak to Tarun. She had lost all the respect, love and longing he had on her. He is busy with his new life. But she even failed to realize that she has a family of her own and why cant be just normal as he was . After all he is one in the family get together.. But her heart didn’t listen to this.

    Tara went inside her room and locked her self……..

    Memories will continue.


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  2. zingy

    zingy Local Champion Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    cant bear the suspense ....

    Post the next one soon :)
     
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    Sure Zingy.. in another 2 mins......... and wow love to see that my story is been liked .. thank you...
     
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    sapthu....you really gave the feelings of a lady who would in a mixed position/thought....lovelt thinking....great going!!!!!
     
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    zingy Local Champion Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Narration along with the plot is simply too good. who will not like it ?
     
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    Saptu...

    well narrated......great going....

    Shanti
     
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    Tahnk you shanthi.. your.. all your feedback..
    it motivates to write more..
     
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    complicated human emotions are very well portrayed by you Sapthu dear..........
     
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    Thanks lovelyme..
     
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