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Behind The Door

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by BDivya, Jun 1, 2016.

  1. sonal1611

    sonal1611 Gold IL'ite

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    wow.. nice Story n nice ending too..

    Waiting for another story from ur side ..
     
  2. aarthi28

    aarthi28 Platinum IL'ite

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    Divya
    I never expected that this will get over soon dear. Finally a nice ending and a bonanza for new year.
    Happy new year wishes....
    I thoroughly enjoyed the story...
     
  3. leenarajaryan

    leenarajaryan Silver IL'ite

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    Hey Divya it feels like u ended the story in a hurry just to end it for our sake. Any ways good ending, though in hurry u gave justice to the story. Thanks. Wish all the IL writers come n complete the long waiting stories.
     
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    meepre Gold IL'ite

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    Nice ending Divya. I too agree with Leena, felt like story was completed in a hurry. It truly made justice to the story but somewhere deep felt a little hurried up in the end. Thanks for completing the story. Amazing narration, please do come up with more wonderful stories.
     
  5. sreeram

    sreeram IL Hall of Fame

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    Oh no... the story got over.... It was just an awesome attempt Divya dear. Excellent narration and fantastic story line. Hope you could have continued the story for some more time. Understand you are trapped with office and personal obligations.

    Congratulations on your completion dear. All the best for your next write up.
     
  6. BDivya

    BDivya Platinum IL'ite

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    thanks @sreeram @leenarajaryan @aarthi28 @meepre @sonal1611 :):)
    as u guys know that IL is blocked in my ofc now so cant type stories frm my phone..anyways i ll try to come up with another after some time...thanks for those encouraging words :):)
     
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    leenam05 Platinum IL'ite

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    Divya dear,

    I checked your thread to see for any new update & shocked to see that you completed story. But all ended happily. I liked all your episodes , so finally all doors opened.:thumbsup:

    Please come up with your next story.:grinning::grinning:
     
  8. geetashree

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    Hi Divya..I just happened to read your story now.. and its fantastic aith ao many twists and turns.
     
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