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  1. Aug 25, 2008 #1
    brindhak

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    நாங்கள் !!


    உயிரில்லா பொம்மையுமல்ல....
    உணர்வில்லா பொருளுமல்ல...

    ஏளன சிரிப்பால் ....
    எரிமலையாய் கொதிக்கிறது இதயம் ....

    பெற்றவர்கள் அன்பு காட்ட
    மறுக்கிறார்கள் !!
    உற்றார் உறவினரோ எங்களை
    வெறுகிறார்கள் !!

    உணர்ச்சிகள் மிதிக்கபட்டன !!
    உரிமைகள் மறுக்கப்பட்டன !!

    அடையாளம் எதுவுமில்லாமல்
    அலைகிறோம் அரவாணிகளாய் !!

    அன்பான உள்ளங்களை தேடி !!
    அரவணைக்கும் கைகளை தேடி !!

    இறைவன் எழுதிய கிறுக்கலா நாங்கள் ??

    கனமான இதயமுடன்
    திருநங்கை !!!
     
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  2. Aug 25, 2008 #2
    Sriniketan

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    Brindha,
    Very nicely brought out the feelings of these people.
    My heart goes to them, whenever I see them.
    We even had one such a person in our neighbourhood, where I grew...

    sriniketan
     
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  3. Aug 25, 2008 #3
    Anandchitra

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    very beautiful written poem.. You need to compile all your works to publish them someday!
     
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  4. Aug 25, 2008 #4
    Jenz

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    Dear Brinda,

    Very nicely written.

    Did you want to write as "அடையாளம் எதுவுமில்லாமல்" instead of அடையலாம் எதுவுமில்லாமல்?

    Cheers
    Jenz
     
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    brindhak

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    Dear mam..

    Thankyou very much for your FB Mam... Its very aching to see these people really...
     
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    brindhak

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    Dear Mam..

    Thanx a ton for your FB... All your encouragements mean a lot to me :)


    P.S ( Did u change the first 'a' into 'A' in your name I feel something different and nice Am i right Mam :)
     
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    brindhak

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    Dear Jenz ..

    You are right my dear.. Its a spelling mistake bonk.. It was a disturbed typing indeed :) with my DD .Thanx for spotting it my dear :)

    And thankyou very much for your FB !!
     
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  8. Aug 26, 2008 #8
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    Dear Brindha,

    Good one !! Very touching.... I have read many of these people's life... it is very painful.

    Very well written. As AC said... do compile it and publish it.
    Best Wishes..
     
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  9. Aug 26, 2008 #9
    Anandchitra

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    I did not change... I think Malathy must have done it when she put my name up for forum moderator..

    I really think you should publish your poems.. they are really awesome!:bowdown
     
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  10. Aug 26, 2008 #10
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    Dear Brindha ,
    A very nice poem -well written ! Yes , they are to be not only pitied but also taken care of . We should create more awareness regarding these people in our society .
    The following lines are very touching :
    Well said , Brindha !
    Love,
    Indhu.
     
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