குழந்தைக் கனவு

rgsrinivasan · Feb 13, 2012

Viswamitra said: ↑

தாய்மையின் ஏக்கத்தை மிக அருமையாக சித்தரித்தது கண்ணீர் வரவழைத்தது.
என்று இவ்வுலகம் குழந்தையில்லாதோரை புரிந்து நடக்கும்? என்று நம் மனம் தனக்கு பிறவா குழந்தையை எடுத்து வளர்ப்பதும் சுகம்தான் என்றறியும்?
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Big questions those Viswamitra. But they need to be answered as well. Besides, there is a very subtle variation in the end as well. Though I ended it with a positive note, it was just a dream and this verse is written in that state of blissfulness for her. Thanks for your feedback. -rgs

srivigneshram · Feb 14, 2012

Nice one!!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!!!!

nithyakarthigan · Feb 14, 2012

Wow... touching lines. superb....

rgsrinivasan · Feb 14, 2012

srivigneshram said: ↑

Nice one!!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks SriVigneshRam, for your appreciation. Happy to receive a first from you. -rgs

rgsrinivasan · Feb 14, 2012

nithyakarthigan said: ↑

Wow... touching lines. superb....
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation NithyaKarthigan. Happy to receive a first from a writer like you. -rgs